I never thought a story like this one could make me feel so down in the dumps. I had such high hopes for this story, only to know that it's been a year since the story has been last updated. If I had known that this story wasn't completed yet, I shouldn't have gone reading it.

I'm sorry, but it's just so frustrating just coz it's that good. Videl's already at a 'turning point' of her character arc, the Capsule Corps had gone bankrupt, Erasa and Sharpener's relationship was already getting more interesting and they were about to get trained by Gohan, and the conflict of the story has just worsened. Basically, it's gotten more interesting.

I just needed more. I don't know, this could be taken as a rant or a compliment, or both. Okay, I'm not gonna blame you and keep whining about it. I just want to let you know that I really, really enjoyed this. That's all.

The argument between Bulma and the aristocrat felt so real. They both ignored each other's points at times, assumed contestable facts that they hadn't provided the foundations for, and kept barely failing to address each other's arguments most of the time. Yet, they weren't acting independently of each other, they was clear actions and reactions within the argument.

poor bulma

omg, I definitely couldn't re-read that part with the town crier and not laugh!

Your story is so good that still to this day I'm waiting for a new chapter. The detail on each person's Dilemma is ridiculously solid. I think you're the second person that actually thought about how things would happen if it were in real life.
This is how "the truth hurts" should have been but it ended up being a failure because of the lack of detail and the short ending.

Okay, this story has been suepr good so far and I'm looking forward to more! And I've got to say that that bit at the end when Videl finally starts to really fight back was awesome! Someone should animate that and put the ultra instinct theme over cause it's amazing!

A great chapter to a great story I hope you continue

That was insanely intense!

Sharpner getting emotional made me laugh haha

Kid: who is the golden god?
Dad: No one knows, he hasn’t been seen in years
Kid: Will he ever come back?
Dad: ...who knows...

So... did you die or something? It’s been awhile...

I don't know if this story is going to continue or not, but I must tell. Bulma's debate about the responsibility of people with powers (giving it a name as a general idea) is one of the best I have read.
I hope that at some point this story can continue.

don't worry videl. I hate Nickelback too

What the hell is up with people like you and trying to have most females in your fic get raped?

It was just getting good!