You wrote this beautifully! I loved reading every word that you wrote! Thanks for writing and stay Miraculous!

Undeniably my favorite and most underrated movie quote from my still favorite movie Casper. “Can I keep you?”

Very good

I love that you tried your best, even if you weren't the best at it, and I enjoyed the story

I know that you said that you would be updating and fixing the mistakes, but there are a lot of things that you could do before you post to minimize them.

First, and easiest, there are a lot of spell checking sites like Grammarly that are not only free to use, but that can catch 90% of mistakes.

Second, you could have a fellow fanboy or fangirl pre-read your chapter before you post.

third, there are Betas, will connect you with someone who will read your work if you can't find anyone else.

If this is the writing of someone with heavy dyslexia I'd hate to not read more. I mean, I loved this story and it wasn't hard to read at all.

I loved this story...
Please continue
Hugs from Ecuador

Please fix spelling errors. Some I found are “faunt” instead of “font”, “moddle” instead of “model”...It would be so much easier to read.