Reviews for Brother Fight Protocol
Mark the Mark chapter 4 . 9/12/2019
omgosh! great story. also waiting on rewrite
Zeta Grey chapter 7 . 7/18/2019
NOOOOO!~ The worst kind of cliffhanger! A NEVER ENDING ONE!~
cabgrant chapter 3 . 6/5/2019
Rusty has freckles.
corbinace chapter 4 . 5/31/2019
I liked the original version better, but this remake is still good
Loud Hater chapter 7 . 4/12/2019
Fuck you Guest, for saying that! Go die!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/12/2019
Fuck off Loud hater you fucking cunt.
Loud Hater chapter 7 . 4/11/2019
During the rewrite, I want to see the Loud Family getting arrested except for Lincoln, and Lily.
Let the rest of the family suffer mercilessly in jail, have all them sisters raped by Stronger prisoners, because they deserve it.

Just saying, pal.
Gold Testament chapter 1 . 4/10/2019
She goes too extreme on April Fool's day to where only she laughs. Only SHE laughs. ONLY SHE laughs.
Hub chapter 2 . 4/7/2019
This is new, possibly better but I like the idea of Lori passing gas. Seems Lincoln might do something bad with luan's pranks book
Redstar940 chapter 7 . 4/7/2019
keep doing it, don't give up on us, I been waiting for a long time for it, please don't do it
Ails chapter 1 . 4/6/2019
Can u continue Locked Luck!
Jpd11 chapter 7 . 4/6/2019
that is completly fine with me
Guest chapter 6 . 4/5/2019
what did you just update?
francisthewitcher chapter 6 . 4/5/2019
Is this a rewrite?
hub chapter 7 . 4/5/2019
I don't know what is in the rewrite, but it's your choice and not ours, even though you ask us.

what is it that you did to your friend and family.
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