Hah, I really like the image of Vanitas throwing the lamp and it just passing right through ghost!Aqua. xD I bet Vanitas would have a lot of nightmares; I like the headcanon that his nightmares make Unversed too.

Lol, Aqua as an Unversed xD I like how you assign a different emotion to each of the Unversed too; I thought about doing that in CaS or SoM, but I forgot to keep track of which Unversed went with which emotion so I ended up not doing that xP

“That’s the thing, Aqua. I’m never happy.” ;; *hugs him*

Lol, of course the monsters wouldn’t be scared of the Unversed at first xD

Aww, the part with the kid was both sad and sweet; it added some really good insight into Vanitas’s head too.

Yeah, the Norts don’t really respect anyone, do they? :/

I want to copy/past the whole part where Van is explaining why he hated Aqua, because it’s so good, but FFN won’t let me do that and this story isn’t on AO3. But anyway, I really love that whole part, that’s how I like to interpret Vantias’s feelings too.

Aww, it was sweet how Van still cares about Ventus in his own way. And that explains a lot of what he said to Aqua in the previous chapter, and how he ended up at the Graveyard in the first place.

“She killed me, remember? I’m not sure she’ll be glad to see me.” Logical guess there

I like how you use the Unversed name in place of the emotions he’s feeling a few times, that’s really clever!

Don’t let the Norts raise kids lol xD

It’s funny getting to hear Ghost!Aqua coach Van from the sidelines xD And loolllll his reaction to being hugged x’D

“I would like to say it was fun, but it mostly wasn’t.” Haha, fair xP

Vanitas, trying to play it cool when he’s finally happy about something :P Their moment at the end was really sweet, I think I liked it even more from Van’s perspective.

Wow, you posted this before the Classic Kingdom trailer came out? I really have been slow at reviewing this xD It was a great fic though so I wanted to give it the attention it deserved!

good content!

OOOh, eh ben c'était super intéressant de voir l'autre côté des choses ! Du coup, j'ai un peu mieux compris la réaction de Vanitas à la fin (ce qui est un peu logique du coup) et c'était vraiment chouette à lire ! Aqua fait un bon fantôme aussi on dirait xD Je suis contente que tu trouves de l'inspiration pour ces deux-là car ils sont toujours aussi cools sous ta plume :D Et le I live bitch me fait toujours autant rire, même si je l'associe tellement à Marlu à cause du meme xD
En tout cas, ce deuxième chapitre était vraiment nécessaire, il a fallu que je le lise pour m'en rendre compte et vraiment comprendre toutes les subtilités du premier ! Cette inversion des rôles en quelque sorte était sympa aussi, tu as vraiment fait du bon travail bro :D Mon commentaire n'est surement pas à la hauteur de ce que j'en pense mais j'espère que ça le fait quand même !
ça va être un weekend de fou, j'ai hâte ! j'espère que ça va te faire du bien aussi, après les semaines de fou que tu as eu, tu as bien le droit de souffler !

Oh man I love how Aqua confuses Sora with Ghost-Vani at first, especially since their voices would sound kind of similar xD

This is a super interesting setup, I didn't know what to expect when I saw this on your posting calendar, but I definitely didn't expect this! It's super interesting how Aqua's the only one who can see Vanitas, and I love the suspense of how she doesn't know why he's there, in her mind or otherwise. And of course I always love his snarkiness xD That would be super frustrating to have to deal with 24/7 though! What about when she needed a shower or something?

Lol at all the thoughts about Zack and Phil and Vanitas's comments in that section xD

I like how Vanitas points out about Heartless having once been people, and how that comes back into play later. I don't see Disney worlds woven in with fanfics that often, and I really like how you did it. It really contributes to the plot of this one-shot and ties it into KH3 well too.

Aww... the conversation between Aqua and Ghost-Vani at night was pretty sad. Especially about Ventus never being called Vanitas's other half. And then Aqua just turning right around and insulting him again. ;; I mean, it makes sense, but it's still sad.

I wish I could copy/paste on FFN, because the whole part where Vanitas talks about his good looks and Aqua drops that she likes Terra is just so perfect x'D

Cid's reaction to Aqua showing up is also great xD And Vani flipping her off xDD

Lol a surprise birthday party xD (More like a surprise deathday party it sounds like is what happens :P)

Huh, I hadn't thought about it, but technically Vanitas really is the only person that Aqua's killed. And she might not have even realized it, considering the funky way he merged with Ven and everything. At first I thought it might be a little excessive for Aqua to feel so sorry for that, but she finally has realized that Van was a real person. ;;

Aww, I found the part where Van comments on the flowers to be surprisingly sweet. Especially since he mentions dandelions, which are significant in a couple ways - the obvious one being the tie to KHUX with Ven being there, and also because they're normally thought of as weeds, things that you look over and don't really want around, kind of like Van's existence. But maybe I'm reading too much into that ;

It's real Vani! :D And it sounds like he has a Ghost-Aqua pestering him too! Oh man I can't wait to read that side of the story xDD I love how he's a little apprehensive about saying sorry, since he obviously doesn't know how and he's probably never even felt that way before.

The hug might have been a bit much, but at the same time, she's probably just glad that she didn't actually kill someone. Or kill them for good, anyway.

Oh, I like that explanation for how Ghost-Van ended up stuck with Aqua here.

Lol I'm always a sucker for Aqua/Van rivalry :D

Great story! I'm impressed at the amount of character development you managed to put into such a short story. Looking forward to the second half!

Oooh, le concept était vraiment super intéressant :D Je suis contente de lire à nouveau du Vanqua avec ton style, c'était très chouette, cette histoire de fantôme et de se faire hanter par son ennemi... pas vraiment ennemi mais c'est un peu le principe.
Aqua devait devenir totalement folle de le voir la suivre partout ! Dire que les autres ne voyaient rien ! D'ailleurs, RIP petit Sora, qui s'en prend vraiment plein la tronche lorsqu'il apparait, gratuitement en plus xD Et quand j'ai vu Colisée de l'Olympe, je me demandais si tu allais parler de Zack... Et bordel, ça n'a pas raté, le petit chaton ;_; Cid perd son côté bougon face à Aqua mais en même temps, elle vient de le sauver d'un looooong thé avec Merlin donc c'est plutôt sympa de sa part U_u
Le "I live bitch" était juste tellement parfait, j'en ris encore xD
J'ai hâte d'avoir le second chapitre avec l'autre point de vue du coup, bien joué bro, j'espère que tu retrouveras vite l'inspiration pour ces deux-là, ce serait super chouette :D
Je sens que je vais encore avoir plein de lecture à venir et c'est cool, normalement, je suis à jour maintenant... Quoique non, allons checker tumblr xDD