? I liked it better when he was super orphan but ok.

still! funs tuff, not sure on where going with it cause so SCANT info on what Obito was like back int he day you know? he was friendly and cheerful but weve only seen him with Rin and Kakashi one time.

you can back track the sarcastic shit he is as older evil tobi? like when hes not murdering people and figure out basic personality... hes fun.

course I think hes less we should love all people and more, i activly know that Rin chose to suicide to save everyones lives and they are all going to DIE FOR MAKING HER FEEL That wAS A GOOD IDEA type of person.
he activly says he KNOWS that Kakashi did not kill her of his own choice she chose it
(which some people seem to think hed magically be OK with it)
and THAT is why he was so irrevocabbly PISSED.

also the complete year of social isolation, possible with no food or sleep or anything else considering his odd body, and the Zetsu are NOT the sort to bring him dead animals to eat and the like.
possibly would have just feed him people or something and have to chose that or starve.

and like hell Maddara was a old mad 90 year old tied to the three was a good conversationalist.

so! not sure what going on there with all the stuff, save Obito having to actively chose the its not ok to do things as a block on otherwise what am I doing type of thing?

im loving the Kushina not giving them any shit so they feel at ease with her and come to her! bonding and team work to defy sensei and thus leads to them relaxing in her clutches!

good fun!

yeah Kakashi and his trauma auto disaster mode, where Minato freaks the hell out to give him some life...

honestly the fact that Sakumos mission was so messy that messing it up started a war usually means that stupid espionage types were messing with stuff they REALLY shouldn't have...
which is fun!

honestly the shinobi world war seems fun in the everyone is going free for all type of way.

but yeah a thing to remember with Obito, hes cheerful and happy and earnest through sheer EFFORT.
not like naturally animated type.

so its HONEST but a bit straining!
so good fun.

honestly go friend stuff! continue on for good life and fun!

I like Rin Obito bonding fun. honestly keep em friends! good fun.

lovely poison gal.

other then that... well it will be curious.

im curious on the numbers and chakra use and everything else... a big thing with having a lot of shinobi population is the whole higher chakra use in general population.

especially cause they are at after the sexond world war bit... curious in deal on population bits... hmmmmm.

that be interesting, being a jimminy Cricket for life and stuff.
oh course the whole oh god he might destroy the world on you...

like im a bad tired on the pairings side that its usually Obito onyl has eyes for Rin? id hope for SOME variety, while I have this insane soft spot for a Konan/Obito thing,, and I dont even KNWO why... curious bit on the friendships change.

but I like it! Si stuff and hilarity without the Si Oc bieng on control so not TO MUCH micro managing changing things up. good fun!

This is so adorable :). But also kind of sad ;-; . Love it either way 3

I love this Rin!

I honestly like the currently character that portrays Rin because of more realistic character development thus far.

Dobre

I really enjoyed this chapter. Rin behaves a lot like her character should be expected to behave. I don't really have any criticisms, so thanks and until next time!

I know this is a simple word, apologies. Awesome!

This was actually quite fun
I really enjoyed it
Thank you

I can’t believe I only just found this, cause it is amazing!

I like this chapter just fine

5 Sponsorship position? Normally military city state want to spit out as much cannon fodder as possible, especially when war is coming soon.

I suppose sponsor could be a thing before the first world war, sinobi should comprised of mostly of different clan members.

Then to fill in the gap of dead clans members, civilian are drafted into the academy.

So... This story must be a huge AU to have such limited space for civilian (it could also be a white lie to encourage competition among student).

Oh wow I’m interested! Very well written and your tin is not that sweet, naive, annoying little girl so 10000 points to you already.
I really like Nue (pretty sure that’s her name, I can’t remember right now) and the fact that the my hood hands? Yes please give me more reasons to ship them!
Hope you update soon!