| Reviews for Hidden |
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   elleestJenn chapter 22 . 11/21/2009 I loved this story! Definitely going into my favorite story list! |
| secondchance123 chapter 22 . 11/7/2009 Bella7, I truely enjoyed your story. I wanted to cry at Jack's final letter and I think you protrayed all the characters perfectly. thanks for writeing this -Nyella |
| ashleigh chapter 22 . 7/19/2008 WOW! I just read the whole thing and what an amazing story. What a great way to bring the present to the past without the cliche and improbable idea of time travel. You are definitely a phenomononal writer! I hope you are still writing! |
| alitheferryyahoo.com chapter 22 . 7/14/2008 Oh my God, I am so in love with you for writing this story, this officially goes down as the best and most touching story in fanfiction history! You made me laugh, cry, and smile throughout this whole thing! I was like crushed when it was over because it felt like I was the one reading about Moira's life, and then when I read the letter Jack wrote I was crying so much! I'm going to be so depressed now that it's over, and I know you wrote this years ago, but if you get this just know that I loved it. End of story. :) |
| Glorydolphin8301 chapter 22 . 3/5/2008 This is a beautiful story. |
| Flick.TheLighter chapter 22 . 11/29/2007 OH. ::deep breath:: MY. ::D.B.:: GOSH. This story was so amazing! i actually teared up during some of the...scenes. it was truely a wonderful experience. i could bearly stop reading it and whenever someone interrupted me, i got really mad. lol. Moria was SUCH a wonderful character. so realistic and belivable. i'll miss her. I usually don't like Jack stories, because Sopt and Race are my favorites (and by the way, i LOVED the way you wrote Race. it was bloody brilliant.), but this story is now one of my TOP faves. kudos to you darling, for writing a true masterpeice. Newsie at heart, Betchya |
| Artist2519 chapter 22 . 9/10/2004 OMG! That was such a great story! You are such an amazing writer! And I checked out your pro, by the way. Go Avirman! I love Mighty ducks, too. And HP, too. It's so cool how you like the same stuff. I'll have to read some of your other stuff! |
| Artist2519 chapter 9 . 9/6/2004 "David needs ass too" ha ha! he's write though. What is going to happen. Is jack going to end up with Moira? Or is he gonna stick with sarah? the suspense! AH! |
| Artist2519 chapter 8 . 9/3/2004 oh, how sweet of all the newsies to do that. It's so nice! |
| Artist2519 chapter 6 . 9/3/2004 oh Kloppman! I grieve, i grieve. Jack was so nice in this chap. Aw, they look so cute together! I hope they get together. |
| Artist2519 chapter 5 . 9/3/2004 no, kloppman NO! i love Kloppman! he's so cool! he can't go and have a heart attack on me now! way to go Moira for speakin up to Jack! And way to go jack for making sense in what he said back! I guess suprises can happen anywhere. hehe _ |
| Artist2519 chapter 4 . 9/3/2004 I can't believe they cut her hair! Kelly better watch out for himself now. I'd hate him too if I were her. *muttering to self* Half a foot... |
| Artist2519 chapter 3 . 9/3/2004 ya, I guess jack really seems obnoxious from this point of view, doesn't he. Though, he still seems very in charecter. this story is so addicting! _ |
| Artist2519 chapter 2 . 9/3/2004 wow, this is really intresting... I have to read more! I'll review the other chappies after I read them. THIS IS SO GOOD! |
| Amandine Daumier chapter 22 . 8/27/2004 This story is so great! I love the way you wrote it and the way it all turned out! The end made me cry it was so touching. You are such a great writer I can't wait to see what else you will write in the future. This whole story is so wonderful I loved every minute of it. :) Thanks so much ~Amanda |
