| Reviews for The Night of the Snow Ball |
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   Isle-of-dreams chapter 1 . 3/27 You should do a follow-up one-shot, this was really good. Hell, maybe even make a full-on story of just Mileven, just wishful thinking. |
| bkusdjydahcadj chapter 1 . 2/29 Best one I've ever read |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/10/2019 Very good |
| fany84 chapter 1 . 4/9/2018 loved it so much... please write more mileven smut |
| GuestAccount17 chapter 1 . 4/7/2018 I loved it! You should definitely write more mileven stories |
| Trash pile chapter 1 . 4/6/2018 "Does liking it make me...gross?" The average thoughts of a fangirl. (P.s. Good story :D) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2018 I just cant express how amazing this was? Ive never read a sex scene so good not even in books. Keep going! |
| Electrostorm21 chapter 1 . 4/5/2018 Damn. You might have to tone it down a notch, can’t have you being ten times better than me. I was expecting some butt action but the plot and incredibly detailed smut kept me happy. Good job 11/10 |
| brucewaynefan chapter 1 . 4/5/2018 In response to Impressed2Review, I was imagining it as El sort of leaning back with her butt on the very edge of the seat, with Mike between her legs and leading forward against her. I mostly just wanted a position where he could shoot his load all over her front afterwards. |
| Impressed2Review chapter 1 . 4/5/2018 9/10 The fucking on the toilet seat was odd and a bit distracting. Wouldn't that be super uncomfortable? Would he have to do this weird awkward crouch thing? And wouldn't it make the toilet bowl and seat the background to Mike's POV of the best day of his life? Little weird. Dunno. Maybe it's just me. I mention it because position in setting is worth paying attention to, and it's my main reason for 9/10. I didn't need so many details about Dustin and Will pissing, but your imagery throughout the story is fantastic. Some phenomenal dialogue too. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you. |
| arandomperson626 chapter 1 . 4/5/2018 this was really good. you should do a part 2 but with more humor.10 out of 10! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/5/2018 My previous comment said "A plus grammar, A plus plot (...)" but ig the character didnt work lol anw i love u so much god I REPEAT: WRITE MORE MILEVEN ID PAY YOU MONEY FOR THIS |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/5/2018 I AM FUCKING SCREAMING? IVE NEVER EVER IN MY ENTIRE LIFE READ SOMETHING SO WELL WRITTEN. A GRAMMAR, A PLOT AND A CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT? LIKE WHAT THE HELL EVERYTHING WAS SO DETAILED, REALISTIC AND OVERALL AMAZING AND I JUST LOVE U SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS IM ABOUT TO CRY THIS WAS SO HOT OMFG PLS WRITE MORE MILEVEN SMUT I BEG YOUUUUUUUUUU |
