You might want to fix this chap and chap 8, i managed to read a little bit but please fix it

this is... well... unusual? whatever happened to this "chapter" you better fix it

Jesus Fuck! Max! Max is so fucking cool! I love Max! Do you have fan art done for Max? He’s so cool! I would totally draw fan art for you on Max if you wanted. You made such a cool character. I almost want to borrow him for my own series of Sonic Fan Fiction. (Don’t worry, I won’t) just wow, like... wow. Fucking Max, dude. Good stuff.

This is adorable! x3
I'm pretty sure someday we will finally make Sonamy canon! Then I can die in peace. xD
However, this is brilliant.

I can't read this chapter... Help?

This story is actually pretty neat, I enjoy reading it so far.
Only thing is that the transitions are a little edgy and the plot jumps too fast, other than that the chapters are pretty short.
Apart from all this nitpicking, I like this story. :) Excited to see what happens in further chapters.

this chapter make me smile

loved it

I love it ! Thanks for this chapter , i will be checkimg on this story ! im excited for part 3!