Ramal's reaction to Baron being a creation made me laugh. He was totally going to make Baron his guinea pig for a second there. Poor Ramal, thought he was a goner.
Again, I adore your writing style and especially your sense of humor. The fact you say the story is going to get darker, interests me.
Can't wait for your next chapter!

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I'm officially in love with this series now. I adore the cover art for this chapter so much too! :DDD

Oh gosh, that last line... foreshadowing? Everything is so happy, sweet, and peaceful... that's probably not going to last... I'm scared now. XD
Haru is so relatable and I love it. I really adore how you write all the characters and their personalities and relationships, it's all just perfect. Also enjoyed the new characters... Except those jerks who attacked everyone and insulted Baron... and Abraham maybe. XD
I love your story, can't wait for your next chapter!

I'm so hooked on this already! This possible conflict going on is very intriguing. I also like the relationships, like how Haru is having a bit of a hard time relating with Baron. Kind of refreshing to have Baron and Haru's relationship start out like this besides have her and Baron being as thick as thieves from the start.
I don't know why, but I feel like Baron is doing something fishy... could be just me jumping to conclusions though.

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Super excited I cannot wait to see what happens next. Keeping my fingers crossed, you are doing an excellent job.

Cool. Good story.

Love it! But why do I feel Baron's the Madman?