Oh my...Looking back at this makes me cringe a little. ;

There will be sekaixyuuto?

Restart, I sincerely like your story and the pairings it has, but as I said a few chapters ago Mayu does not fit into the story. not only for being one of the MANY girls of school days, but because it seems only a filler character, so it is better to eliminate it from the story as for Yuuko, Sekai, Kotonoha and Makoto, it's fine but the plot has to go Slowly, as I said before, read other days of school days so you can be inspired, and finally the gamatical part, you have improved a lot since you started, remember not to make too long or too short, that's all to decide what to do your history

Thanks for the heads up ill get to Reading the reboot now!

Hope that Yuuto guy will make a difference and do some real fixing.

Although I am sad to see the original get thrown to the wayside I look forward to the reboot and eeqerly await the first chapter. pm me if you want any help or advice

Minor question: Shouldn't Makoto take Kotonoha to a lavish dinner and toast several shots of drinks with her before telling her his affair with Sekai? How can he make an apology by such a lackluster manner and expect she to accept it? What is he thinking anyways?

vote to restart the story, one: because you have a character that does not seem to fit in your story (Mayu) two: to refescarte and better your story and three: grammatically start your story right with the correct length and reviewing any errors that you I have escaped, friend, much suere in your story or if you plan to make another story I would recommend that you see the accel world series and give me your opinion about it and if it deserves you to make a fic. bye :D

Reboot but outline your story before you write each chapter. Use time to edit each chapter to get them perfect. Also, if you want, use short chapters.

Reboot, and pair with Kotonoha. Makoto does NOT deserve her, and Sekai is just irritating to me. Kotonoha being paired with an OC gives her so much more room to develop as a person, especially following a failed relationship with Makoto, as she becomes more mature, and confident in herself, rather than being an extremely emotionally clingy, whiny and slightly snobbish little girl who sounds like she's just lost her favourite toy or something

reboot it, and I would like to see him paired with Kotonoha. I hate Makoto and want him to lose her cause he doesn't deserve her, and Sekai is just annoying to me personally. I like Kotonoha/OC fics because they give Kotonoha SO much character development, allowing her to grow and mature to become more confident in herself, instead of just being whiny, extremely clingy emotionally and a bit snobbish.

My dear sir PLEASE continue the story! You have some really interesting, initiative and creative ideas that while I'll admit could be fleshed out a little more do keep me guessing over how things will turn out. As for Mayu keep her around I really like her, perhaps maybe her bubbly cheerful personality could all be an act she puts on and deep down she has a lot of issues. It's cliche but maybe at some point she liked yuuko more than a friend but repressed those feelings and how feels it is too late to let those feelings bear fruition. Your characterisations are spot on but with katou maybe explore her character a bit maybe have something happen where she Yuko (maybe mayu too) are out together and see a different side to her. Perhaps getting deeper into why she bullies katsura and Yuuko trying to change her for the better and actually be friends with Katsura, perhaps katou is influenced more by her three friends than anything else? I've suggested the idea before but I just find the concept of katou going through redemption to be an interesting concept.

Looking forward to your next story! Is it an original piece or based around something?

Really fun chapter! Looking forward to seeing what exploits Yuko and Mayu get up to at Radish. Can totally see him getting protective of her since there were a lot of shady people going to the restaurant from what I remember from Shiny Days

Another great chapter