why didn't Cristoff heal her?

Thanks for finishing the story! Haha, writing can be fickle, there are lots of good stories that have been abandoned on the cusp of seeming to end :( This story was refreshing about Lucy having a hard time after the disbandment, it was good with its ups and downs. Again, thanks for the great read!

Oh my god this is stupid. If Cobra wanted to know what they were doing he could look through their souls.

I loved Lucy playing ‘doctor’

If the King was lying, Cobra would have been able to tell.
I have two ideas on what is causing the smell. One good, the other, not so good. YES! It was the good kind!
Finally got the guys to claim her, huh?

I BET EVERYTHING ITS A CHARM SPELL!
My conspiracy has not been proven yet...

Again, ashamed to admit it turned me on a little too fast I felt a little sick. But glad they finally did it.

She sounds like Mira! (Laughs)
(Laughs) Even the waitress knows he’s bad news. That bastard sounds a lot like Dan but a lot more cocky and smug.
Wooooooooow. Lucy’s masturbating and Cobra’s thinking about it. If u switch those around that’s what happened in GemNika’s story ‘Poison Fairy’.
Ok...so they’ve both thought of fucking each other, but when is it ACTUALLY going to happen?

I liked that description u made of Cobra’s Dragon. It was pretty funny

I very much enjoyed reading this chapter. And I am very much ashamed to say it turned me on a little. (God, I love Cobra)

I fucking hate u for putting in that shit with Zen and Lucy. There is a story a little similar to urs called ‘Chasing the Fallen Star’.

Why does every person in existence that’s writes a fanfic on Cobra write him as a non meat eater? It’s odd. EVERYONE DOES IT. It’s like u guys secretly plan it or something
Ok forget everything I said on the first chapter about Lucy never killing/harming people. I rather like ur version of Lucy.
U know the SECOND it said Bosco I knew that it would be like that. I’m guessing I are using a little stuff from the Pradesh Family or whatever. Everyone uses it when there fic involves Bosco and Bickslow. But I’m getting used to it so it’s not as annoying for people to use it all the time. But what the hell is the Pradesh Family anyways and who created it?
When will this be CoLu? I’m only reading this because it says CoLu at the top.

Hahahahahaha. I love killer and bad ass Lucy. Always refreshing from the pathetic cry baby people make her in fics. They never write how strong she really is.
Ok so again. LOVE killer/bad ass Lucy. Always my favorite. U should check out ‘Issues’. In there Lucy is a junkie and shit like that but real badass too. Really good fic to me.

Oh my god. Lucy killed a child...? She would never do that. She’s wouldn’t even at her own life. But I will continue this because it seems to be leading to something great and also this is CoLu so...
Wait, Loke u KNOW Lucy will lose u and all her spirits off she turns herself in. Being arrested breaks the contracts.

Wait. Wait, wait, wait. Ok u do know that Era was destroyed by Jackal and that the Oración Seis was released at the time of Tartaros attacking right? Ur story does not Aline with anything.
But great overall except for major OOC in Lucy at some points.

I’m so in love with this story so far. It’s like crazy amazing. However I am a bit curious about some things. Such as gajeel appearance in the story. Like will Lucy meet him again? Also will she meet more of the others from fairy tail too and what will she do when she does?! Plus the relationship between her and cobra is just so cute! I’m curious and excited to see what will happen next with this story. I can’t wait to see what you come up with next.

Please update soon

An update! :D Aww, she's still got a warrant in Fiore, it'd probably be easy to either bribe or blackmail it off, not that they operate in Fiore anymore but still. Cuddly Erik! Glad to see Lucy having fun too.

So so so so so happy you got a chance to update!