love it

Hmm no mention of how the girl handled the "fight" before her?

Awesome fight and you kept it realistic in that he only won because of a multitude of factors. kuro underestimated him, the inclosed space of the house kept him from using his speed, and being weakened by surprise gun shots. I would get a beta though to catch the spelling and grammar mistakes. Keep up the great work.

Hope he gets lucky and finds a fruit that's good wait holy shit I can totally see him eating Mythical Monkey Son Wukong fruit make him look like Ssj 4 and he's body gets all in shape cause of fruit he's a troll so wukon fruit would be awesome

love it

See kids never let the bad guy speak just shoot him to spare yourselves the stupidity.

most excellent

Awesome chapter. Yay I really dislike Kuro is like the worst villain of One Piece, Jango is way better.

I'm happy Merry is going to have a long life... marine ships don't live long so mhee. Awesome chapter.

Omg! Thanks for the chapter. Lol when he stabbed the captain I laugh so hard I throw my phone away, it fall in my bed but...it was so fun.

Please continue, I adore this story

... I’m just going to take a shot in the dark and say the box contains a devil fruit

So instead of cunning plans he's gonna go for the blunt hammer down approach?

Hmm well maybe that will be just as effective but what I was really asking was would he or another OC be able to spread word about all the f**ked up s**t that they encounter to the world.

Maybe not via snail perhaps instead he goes old school aka writing down what happened send to someone who doesn't give a f**k or cannot be touched by the nobles. Simply called the straw-hat journals or something like that.

Anyway so far he's funny can't wait to see what he does when drunk or after powering up.

Absolutely wonderful, thank you for the chapter.

Interesting granted is there gonna more changes and any chance of him trolling/exposing the marines for what they are like that cross guy did in the This Bites story on FF?