This was a really cool story and I loved the idea for how they are superheroes. Well done!

It's great! Moved my heart and made me wish there's more. There's a lot of questions that are unanswered like how he got Toothless, if he'll go to jail now that he had his face seen by others and especially how he became a villain. Even if this isn't continued (although I'm hoping that you will continue xD), it's an awesome read as a oneshot.

This was really good! I wish there was more back story to this that would explain how Hiccup was supposedly a villian, how he got his abilities, and many other things about the other heros. This just leaves me wanting more. Please make this into a full story!

Yes! Oh, I’ve always wanted to read something like this! Would it be possible to add another one?
(Also, I thought Astrid’s name would be Valkyrie. Lol.)

Nooooo, this was too good! I loved this and to be honest at first I was not sure about this but thank god I did. You did a great job on this one really! But like other people said it does not feel done too many things did not get a answer. Why is Hiccup a criminal, What did he do becauase he is the most wanted but why? Does he go to jail now? What was the something? Why was hé fighting other vilains? Where did he go after they broke up? I would like more but thanks for the great story!

personally, i think this is awesome and should you expand it, i will read it and review it every chapter :D
only if u want to that is :)

I want more! This is a great story, but I agree with a few of my fellow readers, it doesn't feel complete. There's too many unanswered questions. What is Hiccup doing that classifies him as one of Berk's most wanted criminals? Why is he a criminal? Is Hiccup going to jail now or is he going to escape? What happens between him and his father? How did he find Toothless? Will he become a hero eventually? Please, continue this!

Dang, this was quite a read, I feel like there's still more to cover yet for it to just be over. Like how and why Hiccup ended up becoming a supervillain, is he gonna go to jail now, and if he and his father will ever mend their relationship

This is great. There is a ton of potential in this story. The ending didn't feel complete to me it sort of ended on the first relax of tension but without any of the fallout.
If you ever made this into a full length fanfic it would be a treat read.

Ahhh I loved this! Awesome story!

OMG! I love your story! Did you get your inspiration from vala411's story Phantasm? It is very similar. Keep coming up with these great stories.

This was an interesting premise, but I don't think it reached it's full potential. This is mainly because it never really explained why or even how Hiccup was a villain in the first place. For a Romeo and Juliet-esque romance, those details are extremely important, and ignoring them just feels like agaping hole in the plot. This is only compounded by the fact that Hiccup doesn't want to fight Astrid and we only ever see him fighting other villains in the story. Heck, the only time he does anything villainous in the story is when he he distracts Astrid so he can do...something.

ahh this is so good!

Hope she gets conjugal visits...

CB73

Awesome story! Thank you.