Hurting Harvey is hurting me, but you pictured his trust issues so well, the way he needs Donna to process everything is so real. This one shot is cute and I really enjoyed their banter

OMGGGGG I wish they could have a conversation like this right before they get together! You always know how to hit me right in the feels! Always amazing ️

this is so beautiful and wish it can happen! :D

read it on tumblr and here again. i absolutely love it!

Wow! This is amazing! I loved this so much. They were so sweet together and this had so much heart. I hope something like this happens on the show. Great writing.

My god! This is absolute perfection! I love the plot. The story you came up with from the door scene promo is everything. You killed me with this! The dialogue is so them! The transition from angsty to fluffy and funny didn't seem forced. I enjoyed reading this a lot!

But more than the story, what I love about this is your writing. You really are great at this! The sentence construction is excellent. The metaphors are so on point. The flow is easy on the eyes. I'm a little OCD with typos, but I couldn't spot even a single one here. It's amazing! I'm no writer and my English is pretty elementary, but I know and I can tell when something is worth spending my time on reading. Should you offer writing lessons pro bono, I'd be the first in line to sign up. Hehe! Reading fanfiction in the last few months has awoken a desire in me to learn vivid/descriptive writing. I was never really that into arts and stuff before. I'm more of a science person. But because of you guys, the talented writers here in the fandom, I became appreciative of the art of writing. It's like painting something but with words. And with these words you manage to evoke a range of emotions from us, your avid readers. I'm really grateful for all the works that you've done cos we get to enjoy them for free. Hehe!

Thanks for sharing this! Looking forward to your next fic/update. :)

I think this is your best piece of work this far. I'm probably saying this every time you update, but this was perfect in so many ways. The metaphors were so appropriate and enriched the scene. The entire fic read beautifully; I don't know if it was the pace, or your sentence structure, but it was effortless to read if that makes sense? Then, the dialogue between Harvey and Donna was powerful, especially with all that went unsaid. "I've been so stupid. I'm so sorry" - your Harvey kills me. I wish he could come to this realization on the show. You also did an excellent job at weaving the serious in with the playful banter and then making it sexy as well. Just brilliant. Thank you for posting this!

Beautiful and heartfelt!
Their words felt true to them.
Wonderful work!

Absolutely loved this

ahh I’m so happy you got to writing again! This was beautiful, and even tho you started it before the premiere, it still felt like it could fit with where they’re heading. It was raw but not over the top which is what I get a feeling from the bit in the promo that we saw. And their whole confessions was soo them- so cute and funny but emotional and just how I picture them being ugh I loved it so much. Great work as always!

I love this one-shot! You are so talented! Can’t wait to read your other fics.

I’m glad you decided to finish this. You write them so well and I like the idea of the loss of mike pushing him towards Donna for support. Enjoyed the banter towards the end. Great one shot.

“I don’t know why I came here.” (*me whispers: ‘but the whole fandom knows, Harvey.’) I loved how flawlessly you took us from angst to sweetness. Perfect! Harvey’s confession was everything I could ever hope for. “Nothing else fits but you.” (*awww). Donna’s response coincidentally voiced my thoughts towards your writing too (so good!). I caught myself with a super grin at ‘can’t you just accept this without the sass’. (Of course not! Go Donna!) I will definitely replay this in my head while I watch the show's ‘Do you want to come in’ scene! I already know which version I’d prefer though (*the one featuring Harvey 'with that arrogant, petty tail’ - hahaha - priceless) Oh, that final line? My imagination took me off to Pluto. (still there as I post this review) Thank you so much for writing this beautiful story and for keeping our hopes afloat!

Beautiful! you’re a wonderful writer.

Absolutely loved this one shot ! Mary x ,a.k.a patmar34