When will you realise the other dekujoker? Because I loveed this story! Please do it soon!

When setting up your cover pic for this story... You should've at least used the body of Joker from either Batman Beyond Return of the Joker, Batman Under the Red Hood.

noooooooooooooooooooooo this one is so good don't do that joker also keep write please

This has been a crazy and fuck ride my man. Was gonna work on my story today but put it off again for another day just to look at your story so bravo to you, wouldn’t mind buying this if you are making this into a book. Very impressed by the thought you put into it.

Well that was a dark turn, props

When he said "I'm beautiful!" Reminds me of Jeff

This does seem like a promising story. I do hope that the rewrite would be worth the wait.

If it helps, here are some things to consider:
- Pacing. The story was too fast paced, which didn't leave a lot of room for more details in between.
- ALL MIGHT DOESN'T ALWAYS SHOUT. Sure, he does at times, but he does talk in a normal tone when in his All Might form.
- I think you might've nerfed the heroes a bit. You should make their captures a bit more a struggle, even with the gas and such.

I hope those helped, and Happy Writing!

Nice,i hope you can make it a bit more believable in terms of time and resources,i mean in this story izuku became known too quickly and in less then a year he was already the clown prince of crime and had a "cult" of followers.

I hope your new story will take thing a bit slower.

Well good thing I stuck around some of those grammar errors have been bothering me. Also I hope you nail down the izuku you’re trying to portray cause I’m committed and patient considering current events.

Looking forward to the rewrite. I enjoyed this story when you were writing it. Hope you'll still have Izuku paired with Himiko. For me, Jirou and Mei are the best girls of MHA, but I think Toga is the best pairing for this version of Izuku.

Go for it. I will do as i always do... read it

yep you need to rewrite this especially his origins it's more like jeff the killer(the hilarious creepypasta origin) than the joker, you know joker origin which one tragedy on top on another in just a day, izuku's mother should have died in an accident.

To be honest I don't like that you're re-writing but it's whatever you already decided and I can't change your mind, I just hope that you take more inspiration from Heath Ledger's Joker because in my opinion Joaquin Phoenix's Joker only became particularly interesting towards the end of the movie(when he stopped being a little bitch and took it to society).

Awesome, I was really hoping to see more updates but a re-write sounds good too. I can't wait to see how it turns out :)

I'm still shocked the Dekus mom is dead. Like really.