I think the Cryo lab would make a good murder scene. They find someone floating in a pod.

Some one really needs to make these stories fan games! The story and settings would be great for one!

I think the student that replaced Ahiko is Kebo because it’s said that he was made after the failure of the Izuru project, and a school as great as Hope’s Peak wouldn’t expect to fail, right? So, they planned to have Ahiko in the class, but after the failure of the Izuru project and the creation of Kebo, they removed Ahiko from the class and replaced her with the ultimate robot.

I already know who the antagonist is. I believe it is are beloved Occultist. The trickster may have a connection with Kokichi.

I have to say this: I have found several things that considered too crazy for Danrganronpa series:
1. Danganronpa V3 backstory and plot twist.
2. Danganronpa 3 script.
3. Danganronpa Togami novel itself. Most especially this: The main villain, Kazuya Togami, has an ability (not a(n) Ultimate/SHSL talent, mind you) to create weapon from light by focusing. This has been considered out of place by fans.
Even though, fans know Danganronpa is batshit crazy, these things were still being considered too out of place for Danganronpa series.

NICO NOOOOO! She was based off my favorite youtuber! At least it was fairly obvious though, a bunch of reviewers predicted it and she left HUGE death flags in her final scene. I wasn’t expecting Raef at all though! I thought he’d last until at least case 4! I especially didn’t seee a double murder on the second case!

Wait, Ringo didn’t mentioned he didn’t have a pulse. Shouldn’t the hole in his throat be a more obvious indication?

I like the series! A lot! I've already claimed dibs on the Ultimate YouTube Star (Specialty: AMV Creator). Ultimate YouTube Star is categorized into several specialties, AMVs is one of the specialties. Hanabi Kinomiya is my OC's name. Former Ultimate Equestrian Rider, now Ultimate AMV Creator aka, Ultimate YouTube Star (Specialty: AMVs).

Finally reached the end of Final Horizon! Man, it was quite a ride. I honestly thought Akiho would end up being the traitor, but Giselly makes a lot of sense too. And Kirumi probably isn't too happy Hiyoko died, but, well, it's probably better that way. Overall, this was a great read!

Anyway, on to the other fics!

Oh dear. What an eventful chapter... In my last review I said that this would be a short review but I now feel like this is going to be a bit longer than expected...

Oh well, let's start of course with our favorite Mr. Dickhead Ringo who just had to insult Hayate for his lack of reading skills. At first, I thought he was going to be the antisocial, yet incredibly threatening antagonist dude, but turns out he can also say stuff a typical middle school bully would say. Wow, what a douchebag. Fortunately, Alice is here to defend him (I'd like to imagine Shiori also wanting to defend him, but she was too afraid of talking back to Ringo), yes the ship power is growing...

So it turns out Rei was the culprit of the double murder, huh? Hmm, I have to say that the moment her recorder was introduced, I was suspicious of it. What’s the name of that trope again? Oh yeah, Chekhov’s gun! I didn’t necessarily thought that she was going to be the killer but that it was going to be used somehow in a murder case. Still, the fact that it wasn’t the most surprising case doesn’t make this one of the most despairful case! That flashback with her biting out tears while drowning the Ultimate Guesser was heartbreaking, with poor Nico guessing her intentions and trying to calm Rei down without much success.

And then, total mood change, with Raef being a total jerkass with him not only blackmailing Xialyn but also Rei. I wonder what was his motive, maybe the two years gap? Anyway that was a good way of turning around expectations, silly Raef, a real antagonist would not try to act so soon without a really good backup plan or at least some maddening guns skills! That guy just loves to provoke people, huh? First, he tells Rei that her murder was filmed to the public and that her reputation would be ruined anyway. Second, he threatens to denounce the girl to the other students if she doesn’t obey him. Third, as if his previous actions weren’t suicidal enough, he just had to guilt trip her about killing her friend while he was the one to force her to do the murder in the first place! Sheesh, he might be the true recipient of the Darwin Award with this chain of stupid moves! Anyway, this entice Rei to hit him with her violin, which became the cause of her demise.

Of course, reactions are mixed after she finished telling the events. There's Charles who doesn’t give a shit, as he’s still grieving for the girl he loved. And then there’s Hikaru at the complete opposite side of the spectrum who is completely devastated. Then, it’s backstory time and wow, just like Akiho said, what are the odds that so many of the characters would be connected to Mr. Psycho? Besides wonder how the serial killer knew about her abusive parents, did he had a website à la Hell Girl where people would submit requests to get rid of those they don’t like? Anyway, it seems Rei would end up going to hell too as she’s pulled in one hell of a gruesome execution. Holy crap, seeing her cry and beg to for her life as she’s getting bisected is true nightmare fuel! Honestly, I like seeing panicked killers better than calm, peaceful ones during an execution. It’s more realistic, I feel. I know I’d pull a Kirumi and try to run away if that ever happen, lol.

And boy speaking about horrifying scenes, let’s talk about her love interest Hikaru. Gosh, it must take a special kind of person to be willing to be executed while innocent for his lover! That guy is completely broken, oh no, please someone needs to calm him now or he’ll fall in the deep end… Anyway that was an excellent chapter, oh and I also loved the Afterlife Talk Show, oooh very interesting, so Nico and Rei are dating in this totally non canon scene? I like it. Well that is all for now, totally a short review, right? I wish you good luck with your future writing and till next time, I guess.

I don't have a lot to say in this chapter since it's an investigation one and I can't really give my theories anymore but there’s still a few scenes I’d like to comment on.

First is the one with Jun and their mother. Am I the only one who never thought of them as a girl (and that was before the reveal) “Jun” is used more often on boys, right? Anyway, that was an interesting scene, wow that toodler sure is smart, I wonder what will be their talent in the future? Feels weird to have “her” acting as a mother, but I guess that’s the point since Jun is probably not their real child…

My my, Xialyn was quite cooperative in this investigation, huh? Feels kinda weird rereading FH... At the beginning she felt much more like the trollish/crazy character with her disturbing others like a creepy sphinx cat with her purring/smirking/licking her knife but then she became more…reptilian? Like, there’s still an eery atmosphere around her but she sounds more cold and rational? I’m not sure if I’m being clear? Oh wait maybe it makes sense, Glimmershine seems to really like reptiles with Zalicka being a snake charmer and Saino being a literal dragon!

Finally, to make a change from all the pain and despair, we have a cute scene between Hayate and my daughter Shiori! We learned that Hayate probably didn’t have the chance to go far in school so he can’t read very well and that Shiori has Asperger’s Syndrome and was often treated differently from others because of it. Man, that scene was so wholesome, they’re like a pair of siblings supporting each other! It’s really heartwarming to see a little more bonding even on serious moments like during an investigation.

That’s all for now, my next review (the trial one) is probably going to be even shorter, but oh well, that’s the consequence of me being lazy. Seriously it’s so hard to review old chapter when you already know what happens next!

Ten years later, SqualinaTralala is finally getting back at reviewing! Okay maybe that was a bit of an exaggeration but still I’m so sloooow (and lazy), this story is completed for 3 months now… Also, random thing, but I like to listen to ost of the game VA-11 HALL-A when reading this and SoT because its retro yet futuristic cyberpunk music sounds kinda spacy to me…Since I’ll be commenting retroactively, I will only be giving reactions to events, no theories obviously!

It’s lullaby time with our dear veterinarian! And what a surprise, Maizono was listening to her! Come on, Alice, you should feel flattered to receive a compliment from the Ultimate Pop Idol, that must mean you must have a truly beautiful voice! Because I’m used to playing the games in Japanese, I always forget that she’s actually British, for some reason it makes her even more endearing in my eyes! Anyway that was a really sweet scene between the two girls, we have another small exposition time and we learn that both have a special relationship with Mukuro, fate can be strange sometimes, huh?

The next scene is also interesting, Akiho and Ringo, what an interesting pair… Definitively two of the more instable characters in the cast! They have a talk about psychology and of course the Marksman just has to be a dick about it. Ultimate Dickhead, then? Wait, don’t tell me you don’t think his ridiculous reverse ponytail hairstyle wasn’t done intentionally to look like, you know, a dick? Okay I’m out…

Aaaaahhh that scene between Shiori, Xialyn and Akiko is definitely my favorite of the chapter! It’s so cute and wholesome! I think this is the first time we see Shiori and Xialyn hanging out together like friends, they’re opening up to each other, I love it! To be honest, when I was writing my girl, I was planning for her magic to be more the discrete type, but that scene with her growing a sunflower was a nice demonstration of her powers. Besides, with all the other magical characters manipulating fire or creating diamonds out of nowhere, she would seem kinda lame as the Ultimate Witch if she only did realistic Wiccan magic… And Akiko would like to be more confident, aww she’s totally in love with Alice, huh? Too bad our lady protagonist already has a charismatic thief as her lover…

Nice exercising scene between Wei Yan, Hayate and Charles… I have nothing to say really about that scene except that it was nice?

Hey, it’s our two-faced girl Rei is again playing creepy violin in the background… Ouch, to be forced to play until her fingers bleed, that’s hardcore! Ahh, so she had abusive parents…No wonder she has this type of personality… Fortunately she has Hikaru who believe in her good side, aww another ship is growing, so cute!

In the next scene Raef and Giselly make another unsettling discovery…Holy crap, two years have passed! A timeskip, huh? That would make a good motive…

Wait, did Nico just swam with her glasses? That’s really weird, unless they are actually swimming goggles when that wasn’t really specified… Aww, Nico is so adorable when she’s learning to swim with Charles’s assistance! And oh my, is that another romance blooming? I ship it, it’s all I have to say! Gosh, Nico, what possessed you to stay longer in the pool? As the Ultimate Survivalist, Charles should totally have stayed with her, It’s always dangerous to swim alone especially when you’re a beginner, let alone at night in a killing game! Man I would say that would result in a Darwin Award but that’s way too cruel, right?

Another scene with Alice and Sayaka! Alice sure has some confidence issues, huh? This time, we learn that she has body image issues, poor girl… Luckily Sayaka is here to support her, yet another wholesome scene! Ehe, now I’m imagining an AU where Alice is the Ultimate Pop Idol…

Whelps, it’s a double murder case! *loud body discovering music playing* Nico, I could see it coming with her talent and that pool scene but Raef, oh my Raef I didn’t expected his death to come this early at all! Like many others, with his talent, I’d expected him to live a bit longer…

If I have one small critique to give you, it would be that the first half of FH went really quick…I’ve noticed that as you write more stories, those scenes get longer and more creative and HoH getting a 20k chapter early on with a lemon oh my! ..N-No, I’m not envious… Okay maybe a tiny bit. But who cares really, it’s nice to see you improving so much! I wish you the best for your next updates! (with the other stories of course) Till next time, I gues?

Sun Tzu once said, "Let you're plans be dark and impenetrable as night, and when you move, fall like a thunderbolt." It is safe to say that is not what is going to happen here today.

Let me begin by commending you for this wonderful piece of art you have given us, but also tell you to fuck yourself because of its contents. I am happy and sad...so let's begin shall we?

I love the premise of this being in Space, it was fucking awesome and one of the best settings for a killing game. The cast of characters was great, and I congratulate all of the people that submitted, because they are awesome characters all brought to life by you. That being said, fuck you...you asshole. For killing off so many awesome characters the way you did.

You gave me a heart attack right off the bat when best girl Alice was almost drowned...Okay...I saw your game. Ringo starting the game on a gray area was bloody brilliant, and I fucking love how you use the rules and manipulated them to your advantage. It's like my own rule, When a body is discovered, an investigation will be held. The rule never states if the body has to be alive or dead, yet no one ever uses that gray area, in canon or in other stories. So seeing someone abuse a loophole like that is great, I commend you.

So let's begin with the second murder fuck face. Just when I was beginning to like Nico you wretch her away from me you piece of shit. I had narrowly escaped almost seeing Alice almost drowning. But then you give me this fucking bullshit, and then Raef too? Granted I wasn't as invested at first, but I just loved his vibe as a trickster. Too bad he met his end so soon. Rei's execution had me reeling...I just loved it, but I was so sad too. I truly did feel for Hikaru...I truly did.

So you finally reveal Sayaka in this story, and I was happy...because somehow I knew, Korekiyo wouldn't get the last laugh. But fuck me right? come Chapter 28 you just shoved Negan's spiky bat right up my ass, turned me into a velvety hand puppet stuck on a penetrator. You truly do love playing this game of emotions don't you? You ass turd monkey fucker!

You didn't even give me time to adjust to her being alive...hell it was the end, and you just had to do me dirty like that. Like you did with Ryouko...I'm gonna get you back for Ryouko, just you wait. You thought you were safe, but you will suffer every single ounce of blood that was spilled. Korekiyo be damned, the one pulling the strings is you! It's always you!

I had my suspicions on the third trial, but fuck was it brutal. Hikaru getting his arms ripped off, and Chuck...ugh...damn man...then you made me believe...believe in the darkness.

But there she was, my favorite character of all, our lovely Buns was there to get me out of the darkness. I sniffed a bit of Komaeda's luck in this story, and goddamn it was I happy when she was given that as an extra talent. But you...you mother fucker made her suffer! She didn't have to suffer through all of that, being stuck in that cushy white room...Grr...

Ringo was honestly one of the best characters I have read in a story. The dude had no reservations, knew what he wanted and went for it. I loved every second of him being on screen, and I loved how he met his grisly demise at the hands of Xialyn. As soon as noticed the Salt Circle, I just knew...seesaws where incoming! Lol...jk...but yeah I just knew her Black Magic dealt with the supernatural, though he was a bastard, he went out fighting.

Before discussing the final trial, let me say...once and for all...fuck yourself.

No I mean seriously, fuck yourself. Sonia may be the character that originally got me into Danganronpa, but I wrote my series because Hiyoko was disliked so much. I gradually started falling in love with her character, and learning everything about her made her as complex as other characters in the series. I honestly hate how much she is hated in the community, without anyone ever getting to know the real her.

What you have done here is basterdize her to a whole knew degree. Not only did you take her and turn her into the worst possible human being, but you implanted Junko's child within her? you fucker! I knew she was the Mastermind from the moment Go. I knew it wasn't Sayaka, and I knew it wasn't anyone else. I knew it was Hiyoko Saionji from the get go, because she showed absolutely no regard to the rules of the game. She did what she did because she loved seeing that shit. But how fucking dare you do her dirty the way you did? I don't know what's worse? that you killed Sonia the way you did, but that you fucked me over with Hiyoko too. You had her kill Sayaka? Really? You fucking dickhole piece of donkey fucking, muffin top sucking assclown piece of shit, money screwing, splooge drinking fuck nugget! You didn't even have the goddamn common courtesy to let her live. In the back of my mind, I thought she would somehow see hope...but nope.

Not only did she help torture Class 80-A, and hurt our little Cinnamon bun, but she is responsible for designing a game to break the mind of a child? You fucking heathen. I don't know if I should kill you or massage your feet!

But no...even loosing Hiyoko doesn't compare to what you did to second best girl Gissely. You know...I am always attracted to the bitch in the story. The Ultimate Hacker was one character that I was invested in, because I wanted to see her survive. But seeing her commit all of the murders in one way shape or form was honestly a surprise. I knew that the person with the computer was lickely to be the mole. Yet here we are at the end of the story, where we can all get away, and you fucking let her die. Seriously, what was stopping Hayate from going Mr. Psycho and stopping the execution? Sure, she needed to pay but she didn't need to die. Living with her despair would suffice. But no...you fucking did her dirty just like you did Sonia, and Sayaka, and Rei. Just like you did everyone who died in Hope's Peak Academy. I am appalled...truly.

Let us not even begin with Akiko and how she treated Alice. Truthfully, I never liked her for Alice...thought she didn't deserve her. But seeing her do that to her? God I kept getting angry every goddamn time. I was pissed at Gis too but she was covering her ass so it made sense. I am also mad that Akiho didn't survive either...I feel bad for her, because of what fuckface Jibo the Hobo fuck head did to her. Splitting her mind? God damm man...Now I want the cast of House of Horrors to tear his ass in two, and put his asses back together with glue.

Over all...I had a wild ride with this story. There is so much that I couldn't touch upon. But I will say that It's been a long ride, seems the tides are turning in my favor, as the Sea of Tranquility is next. Let this be a warning...

If I see you murdering more beautiful children in this story...I will look for you, I will find you and I will tear your ass in two. You are going to wish you had avoided every single death you orchestrated. You think Junko is the puppetmaster? No...she is but your proxy, her words come from her fingertips, her actions all machinations of your mind...your psychotic mind. I'm going to enjoy watching you squirm, remember what you hold dear because it is currently in my possession, and I will collect every dollar. Everything that you know will be completely changed and rearranged in a series that you yourself will never be able to comprehend. Alas your choice has lead to the demise of one poor soul...and it will not be the first or last. It is merely the beginning of this wild tale of hours my friend.

The darkest pit of hell has opened up for you...so don't keep me waiting.

"The one that look only for themselves rarely survived." Noted.

I'm now gonna start posting reviews with an account but I'd like to say, this was a really good story and happy with how it went.
Tbh, I did consider not reading this fanfic anymore when you had Hayate "killed off" back in Chapter 18 but I stuck around because I know you're a good writer and I liked the characters and I'm glad I decided to stick around till the end because I'm happy Hayate turned out to be alive.
I'm not surprised that Giselly turned out to be the mole because I noticed that almost everyone believed that but for me I was sort of starting to debate whether it is Giselly or Akiho who might be the traitor. I'm a bit sad for Shuhei because his best friend was the mole, but I think he will be really close with Hayate for Sea of Tranquility, now that they are both brothers and with Shuhei, I have massive respect for him for believing that Alice is innocent till the very end, even if it meant (reluctantly) turning against his friend.
Anyway, would love to keep reading your fanfics and I'll consider writing up a character for a future SYOC.