I gotta say I'm hooked by this story's concept.

The thought of Jaune jumping between universes to save them is excellent and fascinating...

The only regret I have is that was didn't get to have closure with the first world.
It sounded really good and I've grown fond of the characters.
I know that technically they're the same, yes, but their personalities and life experiences were so different yet similar to the characters we grew to love to I genuinely wanted to know how they'd evolve in this world...

Is there any chance that we get time to time a glimpse of what becomes of them?

Still, this story really picked my curiosity and I look forward for the next chapters to come.

Until then, keep up the good job!

I like the concept of this story a lot, and I applaud you for the direction change. It was a bit sudden, but I do agree that too often we the same parts over and over again with one or two things different. I look forward to reading the rest of this story.

This chapter was good, but you should’ve had a better transition. Maybe dedicated a single chapter to briefly describing key events in that first timeline. Something to potentially add in the future.

Interesting premise, Jaune as a dimensionally displaced Peggy Sue stuck on repeat.

What the hell?

it's good

I like what was in this chapter but I am confused on whether or not this chapter is in any way related to the previous six chapters. Is this a completely new story? If so, would it not be best to start is as a new story instead of adding it on to this one? Either way, I am looking forward to it.

Hm. Well this is definitely new. I like it so far. Bit of a shame you're scrapping the other stuff but better to be enjoying what you're doing than trudging on reluctantly.

Good read so far looking forward to more.

This is really good, I love your take on the characters and your righting style. Can't wait to see where it goes.

This story is interesting, it's refreshing to see Jaune so mature, and he seems to become the oillar of support for all his friends! Wonder how the next chapter will be like? What with Jaune being a faunus himself and now how will the people react to him standing up to Cardin? Keep up the awesome work! Hope you'll update again soon!

Oh hey, Neo, was not expecting to see her. Pretty good though.

Son of a... why there?! Ah well, we'll see what happened next time on Lux Noctis.

Will Jaune be going into more than just this universe in the story? If so, will you be skipping to like universe 800 for effect?

Finished everything up to this point. I don’t think I’ve actually ever seen a faunus Jaune in any ff I’ve read. Quite unique there. I liked Jaune’s introduction to Pyrrha. Brotherly Jaune to Ruby and Yang is adorable. I hope Jaune’s attack on Blake is just a playful spar like when they were younger. I don’t like the idea of a vengeful Jaune going after an old friend for abandoning him. As far as the story premise goes, it does have promise. If you plan to have Jaune go through multiple worlds, it may be best to write the important bits and keep things relatively simple, or split the worlds into different individual stories. It’s up to you though. Good luck. I enjoyed it for the most part.

Didn't expect him to rock her shit.