Reviews for Eden's Gate
Hal chapter 5 . 3/19/2019
Hey babygirl it’ll be alright. Things are suppose to suck ass so we remember better times. Your writing is so so good and I really hope you’ll be posting again. The Far Cry 5 fanfics are never past 20ch at it’s sad because it was such a fantastic game. Please, reconsider jumping in here again?
sandradee27 chapter 5 . 10/14/2018
Love this fix! FYI the last post had all weird code in it...
vampgirliegirl chapter 5 . 9/7/2018
Just wanted to let u know this chapter is screwed up. Trust me check it out . You’ll see what I mean
LoverOfArchangels chapter 4 . 6/13/2018
I really love your plot and storyline as well as having the OC not be the deputy. I also love Mary being a woman of color because not many authors have OC of different ethnicities unless it's reader insert with all the Y/N, Y/L/N, etc.
I look forward to the next chapter especially the consummation of the marriage and what plans await. Mary in the bible became pregnant with God's son Jesus and was informed by the angel Gabriel in her dream. She was also stoned for being pregnant out of wed-lock even if she was still a virgin.
Will they drug Mary with bliss and John will be Gabriel in that situation? Was her running away being her stoning? I'm on the edge of my seat.
Guest chapter 4 . 5/29/2018
i hope you write more page cause i love it. keep up the good work.
Fallen.Sariel chapter 4 . 4/30/2018
Aaww.. I really want to know what happens next..! It really piqued my interest! Great story, hope you'll update soon! XD
VickQueen chapter 4 . 4/29/2018
I loved your story a lot. I'm looking forward to more. Please continue.
BeforexImxDead chapter 4 . 4/29/2018
Great update! It will be interesting to see how Mary feels the next day after reading the bible that Joseph left for her. Keep up the great work! 3
Guest chapter 3 . 4/23/2018
Omg please update I love this story so much!
Guest chapter 3 . 4/20/2018
Love it! Can't wait for more!
Alexandra the Dreamer chapter 3 . 4/16/2018
I was so excited to see the email notification for this story in my inbox! I saved it so I could read it after working today, and it was definitely worth the wait!
First off, we meet Joseph (and Jacob and John, though more in passing)! I know the interaction is minimal (and I cannot wait for the next chapter to see a full conversation between them!) but it's already got me on the edge of my seat wanting to know how it goes.
I loved the short exchange between John and Jacob, where you've hinted that Mary's arrival was expected, and when this was further enforced by Anne towards the end of the chapter. Another aspect I can't wait to see furthered was Mary's initial feeling for Joseph, despite her trying to reason it to something else (denial of feelings and then finally acceptance is honestly one of my favourite tropes in fanfic!)
Also I could picture literally every detail about what was happening in this chapter, especially since I've finally got around to watching the short movie (which is now on both YouTube and Prime, so I've been watching it fairly regularly on both!).
Honestly, I absolutely loved this chapter, and fully believe that I'll be saying the same thing for all the chapters to come! It's such a good idea for the story, and your writing is absolutely brilliant. I hope things calm down for you at work soon!
Altora chapter 3 . 4/16/2018
Yassss! Now THIS is getting reeeeally interesting :D Honestly, my favourite chapter out of the three so far.
VickQueen chapter 3 . 4/16/2018
Hi! I wanted to say that I really enjoyed this story and I loved the way you write.
Fallen.Sariel chapter 3 . 4/16/2018
Thankyou so much for updating! Can't wait to see what happens next! Hope you update it soon XD
Guest chapter 3 . 4/16/2018
I need to know what happens next!
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