Noce

What does it say about me that the first thing I thought was "if your demon form has enough tentacles you can win against the magical girls"

Saying that breasts aren't sexual because they're "lumps of flesh in no way related to intercourse," is patently ridiculous. Sex and sexuality is a whole lot more than just intercourse. That comes across as either ridiculous ignorant or religiously fundamental in the bad way. And reducing them to just being "used for feeding infants" is demeaning, and once again sounds religiously fundamental in the bad way. It's not like other sexual parts of the body are only used for sex. Breasts aren't sexual just because they are 'in someone else's mind.' They're literally the main (and most obvious) secondary sex characteristic for women.

Also, I can't believe I just wrote a comment defending breasts being sexual (they actually creep me the hell out), but despite my own aversion to them I'm not so narrow-minded that I can't see that the vast majority of humanity naturally sees them sexually.

As to the gender bend thing...the lack of foreshadowing is really disconcerting, and that's just compounded by the lack of explanation after it happens. Like, WHY?, is Andy interested in trying out being female? Is he just curious? Is it a result from previous uncertainty over being bisexual? Is it because he enjoys some traditionally feminine activities and thus has some societal misconception that he would be better off female? Was he bullied about it when he was younger? It's just really discombobulating as is.

On a positive note, yay! for summoning Astolfo. :)

Another Cu Chulainn. Two dogs really are better than one! :)

just read this whole story over the last 4 days and it has been one of the most enjoyable reads I have had in a long time, hooked from the first chapter and didn't stop. good job you have one excellent story here and I can't wait for more, keep up the good work.

Noce very nice

will we get the meeting of the EMIYAs?

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Oh FUCK I hate gender bender so much!

Woah! Congrats to Andy senpai!

After reading from the beginning and got to this point.
I have to say thank you so much!
You did made a great story here with much more detail and feeling than when I play FGO.
I feel honored that I got to read it, and cheering our servants on throughout this.

I'm so loving Astolfo , Our Kouhai and Serenity. They are so cute!
(And I love Yuri shipped so much even thought there aren't many here.
But with Astolfo, Our Kouhai and finally Serenity here. I'm in heaven hehe.
but don't mind me, I want to see what will happen naturally by what you told in these chapter, Author-san. Have the story going in the way that you want is best so that you won't put pressure on yourselves. )

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Si no lo siento pero no me agrdo mucho estas partes se siento muy sacado con fuerza asi que mee. Te estas saliendo muy rapido de la situacion debister ir mas lento para que se fuera aceptando soltaste la bomba asi como asi y no debiste porner una situacion de porque o x.

Mmm siendo sincero no me agrada yo huebiera preferido que incluso fuera un accidente muy al estilo de ranma para hacerlo incluso hasta comico pero de hecho se lee hasta forzado ese cambio de sexo honestamente la unica cosa que se me viene a la mente si me dieran la oportunidad de ser mujer y volver a mi yo de verdad es y la verdad las cosas como son, masajearme las tetas y saber como sienten el placer ... es lo unico que se me viene a la mente.

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