Really good, I 100% loved it. It was pure and beautiful and overall well written. Thank you for that.

I just finished this story and I loved it! Joy and anxiety and comedy and of course the fruition of the relationship! Great job! I could already feel the way this was going to end as soon as Weiss met with Ruby, and it is great to see that I was right but it was great to see how it finally played itself out. Fantastic!

That was beautiful. Thank you for writing an amazing story. I think now is a good time for me to go through your library and read the stories i have missed.

Hey sorry this story didn't get as much love as it should have. If it counts I really enjoyed it! Rwby isn't old news at all at least not to me and your writing is amazing :). Also the moment Blake was shaky after the dinner I figured she asked weiss' dad for her hand from that moment I knew they were going to propose at the same time but it didn't make the story any less enjoyable. I love your take on monochrome especially renegades. I would love to see more. I cant remember if you have but have you written any freezerburn?

Hi, just wanted to pop in and say good job on the story. I really enjoyed it.

I am a Bumbleby and WhiteRose shipper at heart but I am always open to see how other people see the other ships of the RWBY fandom. This is the first Monochrome fanfic that I have read (including Taking Chances) and I have to say that it is amazing. You kept them to their characters, Blake's quiet worry for the people closest to her and Weiss's mask which her emotions hid behind is very prominent in this book. Again, excellent work

I did start to wonder if Blake had the same idea, but only in this chapter. I was very late to the part. :D Seems that their family and friends are very good at keeping secrets. ;)

Wonderful job with the proposal and how overjoyed both of them were; considering their more introverted natures, it was very heartwarming to have so many people so happy for them. :)

Take care, good luck, and I look forward to your next update.

This was a lovely sequel. If only things in real life could work out so sweetly like this. XD Great job! :)

Really loving this story so far! Goodness Weiss! You're so brave! I'm not sure I'd be still standing in a situation like that. XD

Called it.

I was afraid some unexpected hitch would happen. Good thing it didn't.

Excellent work! I guessed they would propose to each other at the same time about halfway through chapter 3. Nice, cute lovey dovey story. I enjoyed every word! Nicely done and keep up the good work!

Okaami-chin here

Excellent work as always. I do admit I've been busy to read works but yours is always a pleasure to read :)

This was soooooooo sweet! Just loved it!
Only you can do this to my monochrome heart!

I've been reading your stories for about 3 years now, and each one you make I enjoy to no end. I am so glad you can make these stories for us to read and I hope you keep doing it. I love this story to no end, it's so cute. KEEP ON WRITING!

This was so nice, I was actually getting nervous and emotional myself here.
Thank you for writing this story.

daww. and scheeming sceemers them sisters are. good update!