Love this!

This was a fun read! There were some mistakes regarding canon details (ex. Skeeta as opposed to Skeeter) that caused me to be jarred out of the story's flow. Perhaps an final editor could go through and fact-check names and details?

I didn't mind that Sirius was saved, I was hoping for it actually! And this is fanfic so why not?
I do think that your shorter, one-shots seem to be cleaner in execution/editing than this piece. I'm not sure what the difference was when writing this, but if it was having 1-2 beta's to look over the writing and an editor to polish away the rough edges, I would try to do that. I hope this came off as constructive criticism; I hope my words encourage your growth and not hinder it. I find that you have a great writing ability and hope it continues to flourish!

I love Sirius too, I'm hoping you love Fred enough not to kill him off when the time comes!

Awesome story. Loved it and cannot wait for more!

i can't even describe how much i loved this story. thank you so much you wrote them and their dynamic perfectly, you made me laugh and you made me care and you made my night as i've spent the last two hours reading Rebel with a Cause.

I’m not usually one to leave reviews on stories I read but this one is so good I couldn’t not.

The concept for this story is original and you wrote it so well! The progression of Hermione and Fred’s relationship felt very real - natural and authentic.

Thank you for such a great piece of writing!

Loved this! It was very well written and I felt like you maintained the character's personalities well while telling a new story.

I really enjoyed reading this story, thankyou ️

One of the best spicy-sweet Fremione fics!

This ruined my life in the best possible way I hate how much I love it thanks

this was fantastic

O.M. Gracious, this is one of my favorite Fremione stories I've ever read! Thank you for sharing!

Brilliant story. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

I love your story! I hope that the sequel will be out soon! You’re an amazing writer

I usually only read femslash but I decided to try out something new and I'm glad I did. This was good, for the most part I loved the way you portrayed the characters. Although I was expecting the ministry battle scenes you're correct in not needing them since everybody knows what happened and Ginny summarized it well. You're spelling and grammar were on point, I don't remember any mistakes and the breaks in the chapters (the line with the dot, I don't know if that was intentional or something else) helped make the story flow nicely. I'm definitely going to check out if you posted anything to go with this