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Onewithyou chapter 12 . 10h I am absolutely loving your story. Cannot wait for more! |
gothamnights chapter 12 . 9/8 Yes! The angst is back! I actually re-read the story to keep if fresh again in my head & it was sooo worth it. Another great chapter as always. I really loved jealous Barry, and him & Caitlin’s little banter in the hallway. As I read that scene I could picture it clearly as if it was in an episode. It once again proves your accuracy of the characters are undefeated! Also it shows me you either watched this show as much as any true fan or you’re secretly lying that you don’t work for CW lol! It breaks my heart to know this amazing story is coming to an end, but I guess all great things have to end sometime. I do hope to see other snowbarry stories from you! You know how to use all the ingredients to make a perfect story: plot, angst, pacing, fluff, and sex. Later, are we going to see Barry & Cait go on an official date like fancy resturant/night on the town that leads back to the apartment for fun, or are looking at villian kidnaps hero’s love interest, hero rescues her, sparks fly and they passionately kiss? Or you can keep it a surprise. Everyone loves surprises! |
DestianaCaldin chapter 12 . 9/2 Yes yes yeeessss ! Finally one of them just said it ! You got me scared at the end when they started fighting again and I was like 'Oh come on just saaayy iiit' and he did... and you had to end there, didn't you? I see what you did there, keep us wanting more, that's smart, nicely done! Anyway, amazing chapter, loved Cisco and Ralph here, that bit was really funny! Got me scared with that new guy, because come on she kissed him, and I wasn't expecting thatbut I had a lot of fun reading this chapter, thank you for the update and keep up the good work! Your writing is on point, as usualcan't wait for the next one! |
RoyalZoid chapter 12 . 9/1 It's fucking amazing, I started reading it 2 days ago and I can't wait for more. I'm so happy Barry finally told her how he feels and I can't wait to see how she will react. Thank you for writing this amazing story |
Jacob Alexander Chiara chapter 12 . 8/31 This was an amazing chapter great job |
sn0wy.mk21 chapter 12 . 8/30 OooOoooH SNOWBARRY IS BACK ON i think love this story btw :) I'm actually thinking of making a Zoey 101 version of this with Logan and Zoey if possible but, I'm trying to think of the story plot like how it all begin like should I make it after they graduated from PCA or between PCA memories and skip to where they both got jobs or something so many scenories to think about. |
geekymoviemom chapter 12 . 8/30 Aahh! He finally told her! Let’s hope she doesn’t freak out now, eek! |
Guest chapter 12 . 8/30 This means it's gonna end soon, nooooooo! Please, even if it means more angst have Caitlin deny stuff or end it ;-; |
jdcocoagirl chapter 12 . 8/30 i thought it was funny how ralph found out the secret and enter a monolog while cisco is trying to sound it out. i felt that caitlin need space, but i did not expect her to find ways to hideaway on pretens with meeting old friend/classmate. i cannot wait how cait will respond, either she would go forward or retreat... stay safe and healthy. |
Guest chapter 12 . 8/30 Wow |
CallMeMiles chapter 12 . 8/30 I want to say this will be smooth sailing from this point, but I don't think so. We still need Caitlin to admit her feelings and we still have a meta out on the loose. Great chapter! I can see both being the jealous type. I was kind of looking forward to Caitlin dealing with a drunk Barry. Can't wait to read the next chapter |
Elladora chapter 12 . 8/30 I was so excited to see an update for your story. I loved the interaction of the boys at Cisco’s, and losing Barry. I appreciate that Caitlyn is still working on her projects and progressing them. The relief i felt for Barry finally admitting his feelings to her directly was so palpable I whooped for joy. I’m So happy today cause of your update. |
JLgods01 chapter 12 . 8/30 The confession finally happened! Pls just get together. Can't wait for the next update! |
gundamseeddestiny chapter 12 . 8/29 Your story is amazing! I forget what happens when the updates are long but as soon as I read the new chapter I remember |
ShanouNash chapter 12 . 8/29 Oh no, you didn’t just stop at THIS moment?! Oh my god, I can’t. The feels! It’s too much! Okay so we really delved into the angst. Like you said it was necessary. I was just not ready about how harsh this angst could be. All these pent up feelings just had to come out, I guess. I actually really felt like Cisco. Like, Barry and Caitlin will have the death of me. I know it has a purpose to the story but I was so not ready for you to introduce Lesley and let Caitlin kiss him and all. I was like "No way! She won’t do that! Caitlin! Stop!" But it helped her realize her true feelings so it’s okay :’) And we had jealous Barry thanks to him so it’s good ;) I think it was also a good idea to introduce Joy. It’s nice to have new characters and she was able to give an objective opinion to Caitlin. I laughed a lot when Ralph realized the condoms episode wasn’t what he was told. It was so much fun with Cisco wanting him to stop! You wrote this dialogue so well :’) So about this end... Oh my god, I’m still speechless. Like the make up sex was amazing but then, when they began to talk and Barry told her he loves her. I just can’t wait to read the aftermath of it. Caitlin’s reaction, if she will tell him she loves him too, or if she will still believe he doesn’t really love her. Are they finally going to have a real talk about what happened? Like are they going to talk about that very first time they had sex and they didn’t tell each other they had feelings because they let each other believe it was just sex? Or will Barry tell Caitlin what he really meant when he told Iris that he missed her? I think there is so much to say. So much misunderstandings that need to be cleared. I was really not expecting Barry to admit his feelings like that and now I’m so curious of how it will continue. I know they will end up together but HOW is the true question. I can’t wait to know! I’m also kinda sad we’re coming to the end of this fanfic. I feel like we’re in it for so long it will be hard to say goodbye. But all good stories have an end. As long as it’s a happy one, I’m fine with it ;) Take your time for the next chapter, there is no pressure. It was an amazing chapter, very well-written as usual! |