I really enjoyed your second chapter of “Chronicles of Stone.” As a suggestion, I suggest to directly say who’s point of view it is instead of saying “ line break POV switch.” For example, if it’s Will’s POV just say Will’s POV. Besides that great chapter.

Peace out,
-Amora23

Hi there newbie!
I loved your first chapter of “ Secrets of Stone,” as a suggestion I suggest to edit a little more. Also, instead if writing “line break” you can put three gesture stars (*) to signal line break. Besides those two things good start. * gives a thumbs up* As for tilte suggestions here are a few: (please tell me which ones you like best) Son of Demeter, Chronicles of Stone, Life at Camp Half Blood aka CHB, A Demeter Legacy, Legend of Alex... and Idk, lol.
-Amora23