loved it!

Interesting story, I couldn’t stop reading lol

Why would Harry care about giving money to the school when all of his inheritance was stolen from him and used by Albus for the school already?

Bella finally got kissed. but by the wrong guy.

Cute story. Harry was smart and capable without being a super!Harry. Thanks for sharing.

Good story but the ending was eehh

Re: story error involving Gringott's Dementor attack & reason for twins exile in epilog.

The Weasely twins couldn't have been exiled for drowning Delores Umbridge because the Dementors sucked out her soul during the attack on Gringotts. It would have to be someone else.

Otherwise, fairly good for the most part. Although, when referring to how someone moves in pain you should use "writhed" instead of "withered".

Major OOC for some of the normal favs, like the twins and Sirius. Everyone always writes perfectly pranky versions of those, so this was a nice change.

Pure blood red heads is something that is somewhat easy to justify, like they obviously aren't marrying muggleborns and always have that "aww muggles, how cute" vibe, so this is a direction that was interesting.

Over all I say this was a fantastic read.

xxXxx KUDOS xxXxx : )

"Dennis Creevey was present"
No, you dumb bitch, he wasn't. Colin Creevey started Hogwarts a year after Harry. Since this is Harry's third year, it's Colin's second year. Dennis is two years younger than Colin. He didn't start Hogwarts until Harry's fourth year. That means Dennis isn't even AT Hogwarts yet! He's still living with his parents, going to primary school.

"the proscribed treatment"
Proscribed means forbidden. Why would they tell her parents about a forbidden treatment? If it can't be used, there's no use telling them about it. You really are incredibly stupid sometimes.

Why in the world would Harry want to give fifty per cent to Hogwarts? Hogwarts didn't do anything for him during his second year. Hogwarts, and Dumbledore, stole all his money and property. Hogwarts students harassed him and called him the Heir of Slytherin all year and not a single professor did anything to stop them. No, Hogwarts deserves nothing.

Blocker? What? There's no such position in Quidditch! It doesn't exist! You can't just make up Quidditch positions! You might as well make up an entirely new sport.

I would have killed Sirius. He was a worthless racist and murderer.

Very, very good story but, Harry Potter was "not very interesting" in the end.