Good work

Mhh, nice, i slightly hope Qrow will be Ruby's father.

take your time and do it the way you want we can wait

Also, yes add Blake. It’d complete RWBYs team ;) and ofcourse, more whiterose which is what I signed up for in this fanfic mwahaha

Do the fight scenes. Just watch youtube fighting videos to get rid of your roadblack like Monty Oums old videos. If you want I can link you my fighting playlist. Anyways, love what you doing, keep up the good work :)

The fighting was fine, and i think adding Blake would be good for Yangs character. But you dont have to add her in if your not comfortable writing that much.
I also really like how the story is moving so far, but therr are little moments where you could add a little more detail. Not things like the town, but scenes like Weiss's undergound home place.
I hope this is helpful.

Impressive work so far, in spite of a few grammar errors here and there, this is a good read so far. I eagerly await chapter three. Keep it up :)

~Cluny.

Welp. I typed that on my phone and it jumbled up. Sorry.

To answer your questions.

1. While a fight scene is good and all, I think the thing I love about Weiss the most is she's more clever than skilled. So you don't have to make her a badass killer but I would be nice to see that Ice Queen mean streak go off on Roman. Plus what use is Ruby if Weiss can annihilate anything in her path. haha. But it's up to you. if you want to really make a good fight scene go for it.2. Honestly Blake is my least favorite character. So I'm very bias and unhelpful when it comes to deciding whether Blake adds to the story or not. Volume 4 and 5 killed me any time we had to visit Blake and listen to her dialogue. But if she helps develop anything for White Rose I'll be all for it. That's what I'm here for after all. The white chapter 2.
I really like this chapter because a lot of it is focused on Ruby and Yang's relationship. And it's kind of cool to find out that Ruby taught almost everything to herself. it's kind of weird about how fast she found out about Weiss and the Royal family. We don't really have much background on the world yet, which is something I want to learn more about as the story develops.I hope this helped out.

can't wait for more

Oh man... I can't even be disgusted when it's Weiss. I still want Ruby to go after her. haha. see you next update.

Interesting