Gosh I absolutely adore this story! Though I can not lie I almost stopped reading after her miscarriage. I was bawling my eyes out, my nose was running...it was not pretty. But I had to keep reading for poor Kakashi. His reaction was somewhat what I expected but also not. In other words, I totally expected him to blame himself but that was it I did not expect him to go into denial and to start to look into miscarriages of the population. And then for him to actually find something that was interesting so of course I had to keep reading. And then for her to find something to corroborate with his findings was fascinating. But why did Kiyoko have a gut instinct against telling Yuzuha? Will Kiyoko apologizing to Kakashi start to mend their relationship? Will Kakashi finally get a shower and change his clothes?

I’m freaking out this is so cute. Also, wtf? Kyo is so developing feelings!
I’m dying to know what comes next. Please, keep up the good work! :)

I'm ridiculously giddy right now lol. I enjoy this way too much for my own good. This chapter was great like usual, and I'm glad that they were able to reconcile quickly, so they can work together on this. I can't wait to see what Kakashi has come up with so far, and see them work it out/brainstorm! Thank you so much.

Sad this isn’t an update, but I’m excited to see the fan art. Thank you Orthodoxlily and emerrixd! ;)

Damn that is cool. I can't wait to see the portrait

I forgot to mention this in my last review but I do hope the person that is causing the death of the babies is an outsider bc i just can't see any of the main cast like danzo even do this . He's all about making his village strong .

Just binged all the chapters in 24h and now I’m sad that I have to wait for more ): Great work!

I’m freaking out. Literally.
I’m SO looking forward to the next chapter.
Hope you are feeling better on your creative side, this story just keeps getting better.

I just like this story so much I can’t seem to put it down!

OH MY GOD THE SUSPENSEEEEEEEEE THANM YIU FOR UPDATING!

Awww! This is crazy! You completely threw me for a loop. I did not see that coming! I can’t wait to see where this goes.

I almost skipped this chapter because I thought it was the chapter you updated yesterday. That was when I saw when it was updated.

I’m glad kakashi was right. Some people might think it’s Danzo but that is probably not the case as it would make Konoha weaker

omg Kakashi! i cry for he!

great chapter as always.

welcome back!
Have to say you really surprised me with this new plot. I was really not expecting Kakashi to react that way. To firnly believe that someone or something did it on purpose ( i guess at some point in your life your life you revolt against the fact you are so unlucky).

Since Danzo is usually the guilty one I tought it was him. But there is no advantage in causing abortions. In fact its disadvantageous because there will be less ninja! But! what if! this is in fact a continuation of the mokuton experiments? and instead of kidnapping and using kids and toodlers they decide to experiment with a developing baby? Shinobi-civilians pairings are the best because one parent is already a shinobi (thus developed chakra) while the other being a civilian means no clan protection.

Well I dont know where Im going with this but it sure will be interesting! Lets hope Kiyoko can calm Kakashi down and make him take a break :(