THIS ENDING GOT ME TEARING UP,,,,THE PERFECT CLOSURE TO THE PERFECT STORY,,,,TY FOR WRITING

Ah, I am SO glad Jay finally got himself together, because really, I spent the whole first half of the story biting my nails and cringing at what he was doing, mentally shouting at him. : But it's good how everything worked out and Jay let go of Nya and got with Cole. Go Bruiseshipping! Anyway, I digress. This was a great story, and I loved the whole idea of alternate universes and travelling between them-I've always been fond of dimension travel stories. Actually funny thing-I actually found this story like months ago; I just never really got around to reading it until now, but I'm glad I finally did. Seriously, can't wait to check out your other stories!

I'm sorry I took ... a whole month to get around to reviewing this! I swear, I enjoyed this fic from start to finish. This is such a fitting epilogue and it brings so much together (with none other than Wu of course) in a perfect way.

It's so nice to see that they did manage to get Zane up and running! What a sweetheart; just from his few lines I love him. And really liked all the reasons they decided to tag along with Kai and Lloyd's family.

The image of Cole and Jay sitting outside on the roof, under the stars, as they talk Jay's insecurities out is gorgeous. Cole and Jay have /such/ a nice relationship - I absolutely lost it at Jay teasing Cole at calling himself earth. Dorks.
But then he's also still haunted by what he did, because of course something like that doesn't just leave, and it's painfully understandable how he feels about himself but Cole's so sweet with the way he explains why he thinks Jay's doing pretty alright. And why he loves him. That was so cute of him. They really are good for each other. 3

Again really sorry I didn't review this sooner, but I loved this fic and this ending is absolutely wonderful!

I love how you tie things up with having everyone together, especially with having Zane and making Dr. Julien's dream a reality. The approach you take with him, making him curious but still his intelligent self, is a great touch. Also, can I just say how much I adore Lloyd in this XD? You nailed his characterization and his relationship with Kai. I really enjoyed the subplot you added with him, and it was so satisfying to see everything work out for him with Misako.
The Cole and Jay scene at the end emphasized everything I love about their relationship :D. Cole comforting Jay was so heartwarming. The message behind his words was great about not letting your mistakes define you.
I'm so glad that I discovered this story! It was a great balance between adventure and romance, and I'm still blown away by how creative the concept is. I saw on your profile that you're going to be writing an AU with Lloyd, and I will definitely keep my eye out for it!

Alright,,, first of... ZANE! When I read that line and the word 'impractical' just hit me like: IT'S ZANE. OH MY GOSH HE'S FINALLY HERE ZANE!
Ah, I love Zane? A lot? Sighs.

Ooh, I love how Master Wu, in this case just UNCLE Wu, has his own Monastery with training equipment and whatnot. And to see Nya and Cole get excited about that, ah!

And /Zane/ wanting to learn how to /cook/. Ahaekfklef he's so pure.

Gosh, it's nice to see that Jay and Cole are together now. And wow, haha two months later huh? That last part, ahah, Jay's such a pure bean, I want to hug him. Man, it sucks that he always thinks about that huge dimension hopping thing pretty much everyday now. What's worse is the guilt he feels is still there... And awhah, man, I LOVED that part when Jay asks why /him/ in particular even after all the things he's done.

Cole's such a great guy, honestly. I'd do anything for a friend like him.

I really enjoyed this fic so much! I loved the message it delivers, the slow build up to a romance from a friendship weaved into it and everything else! Sad it had to end, but yanno, all good things come to an end at some point ... I can't wait for your next fics X3

¡TENGO TANTAS COSAS QUE DECIR QUE NI SIQUIERA SÉ COMO PONERME EN ORDEN!
Creo que el final fue perfecto, no te pediría que le cambiaras un solo punto, ni al final ni a la historia, me moría por ver algo así, donde todos estuvieran juntos, ¡por dios, incluso Zane estaba allí! Creo que fue una escena preciosa para despedir la historia...

Es que, realmente no sé que decir ahora xD
He amado cada detalle, Misako enseñando a cocinar a Zane ha sido demasiado lindo y ¡todo lo ha sido! Tanto como que Jay incluso ahora piense en las consecuencias..., creo que de lo que más me gustó en esta historia fue como manejaste el personaje, ¡fue perfecto!, ¡todo fue perfecto! Creo que siempre será mi fanfic de Ninjago favorito, o entre los primeros como mínimo, y me duele que termine, ME DUELE QUE TERMINE MUCHÍSIMO, ¡ojalá pronto tengas otro proyecto en marcha! ¡mil gracias por cada viernes que grité mientras leía! x'D

Okay since this is the final chapter, I'm just gonna open a notepad and write my thoughts as we move along

"2 months later" :DDDDD

Formal way of speaking? COULD IT BE-

ZANE! Omg I just screamed on the inside and the outside and I'm also smiling like a total dork

THEY'RE GOING TO WU'S

AND SMOL LLOYD IS SO EXCITED

Oh my god Nya is so happy about the fighting equipment

WOOO, WU IS GIVING THAT WISE ADVICE, LET'S GO!

"Should I call you mom then?" okay wow, I'm dying XD

ZANE WANTS TO COOK, EEEE!

(This is the part I stop live-reacting because I wanna enjoy the bruise XD)

(This is the part where I scream in Discord)

(And this is the part where I try to put my thoughts together while listening to a bruiseshipping music playlist because of obvious reasons(tm))

W

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Okay wow, seriously. This was such a great read. I can't stretch how much I love this enough.

Everything was so in-character, the flow of the fic was PERFECT, the writing is spectacular, the story itself is interesting, and just... Wow, I can't find the right words? I don't think anything I see can do this justice!

This is one of my favourite fics of 2018 (and tbh, fave fics ever), and I am so glad I stumbled across it. Thank you so much for writing this!

Aawww. I'm guessing this is the end if this story? you ended it on a satisfying note though! Cole and jay, oof, I can't get enough of their relationshipthanks for the update!

¡Es terrible que apenas ahora pueda leer! Estúpido internet..., en fin, me da un sabor amargo pensar en que ya falta poco, ¡pero eso no es importante ahora!

Creo que esta forma tan..., no lo sé, creo que me encanta como cada cosa empezó a encajar en su sitio, Jay convenciendo a Julien de crear a Zane, disculpándose con Nya, su nueva amistad con Kai, ¡y que fuera sincero con Cole! Solo imaginarlos a ellos juntos aquí me es taaaan, tan tierno y genial y perfecto, es fantástico, de verdad, como caaada cosa emplaza a encajar donde debe estar :D
¡JAY ES TAN TIERNO! Es más, Jay y Cole lo son tanto, juntos yy y nerviosos y adorables, creo que fue mu parte favorita, no, lo fue, me encantó, aunque cuando Nya animaba a Jay también, a este punto no puedo escoger :''D

It’s great to see Jay making the steps to fix his mistakes. The checklist is a bit cheesy, but it’s something that I can imagine Jay using XD.
Nya is the definition of a great friend. I like that she didn’t laugh off Jay’s explanation of the dimensions, but listened to him seriously, and gave him the motivation to speak to Cole and Kai.
Speaking of Kai, I could feel Jay’s nervousness when talking to him. I can definitely see Kai as a tough guy persona, that in the end just really cares for his friends and is a bit overprotective.
The Cole and Jay scene made my day :D. I love the atmosphere of hanging out in the ninja fort. It really shows what great friends they are and it reminds me of the videogame scene earlier, except this time we get more closure with their feelings for each other. Which, by the way, still has me squealing XD.

Woo, back from Canada so yay! I can review!

First of all, I have to say I'm basically like Jay in the beginning of this chapter. For example when he was listening to the news and started feeling guilty for so many things, that's me. That's so me. After I know I've done something wrong I just can't stop thinking about it and kinda do things that make me feel even more bad about myself. Oh gawsh.

Also, yay! He apologized to Nya and told her everything! "You should really get in on that last one." Hmm, Nya. And Zane! Ah! I didn't even know if he'd be in this story but woo, there he is. Or, rather, a mention of him first.

And Kai rides a motorcycle and gosh he is - I love him. He's such a protective guy. HAH HE DIDN'T SHAKE JAY'S HAND IM CRYING.

Drumroll please... here we go... Jay and Cole! Time for the bro stuff...
HE DID IT! HE ASKED HIM!
Jay dressed up.
JAY DRESSED UP.

Also, was it purposely done so that Cole's lines when he accepted Jay's offer both times were the same? Cuz ah, smart. I caught that. "Yeah, Jay... I would really like that."

GOODNESS I CAN LITERALLY JUST IMAGINE THEM SITTING IN THIS LITTLE HIDEOUT FORT AND COLE'S JUST SITTING THERE EATING NOODLES WHILE JAY IS BLABBERING AND TRYING TO GET TO THE POINT. BUT AS HE'S DOING IT HE'S KINDA JUST ALL FLUSTERED AND THINKING: I didn't think this through, did I.

I definitely can't wait till the next chapter!

HHHNGH HERE WE GO
I LOVE the first few sentences so much; they just FEEL HEAVY and like the world does when it goes on without you and your mistakes and it's so EFFECTIVE at conveying the weight of Jay's current situation.

I also love that Jay messes up and feels bad for it, but still isn't absolved of having made such mistakes by virtue of him sincerely feeling guilty and regretful about it. Like, the consequences don't disappear even though he "fixed" the immediate problems, and that's obviously how life goes and by logic's dictation the fic, but it's very well-done in this fic and ... I just like that. Jay's a character where that sorta lesson's important. You know.

Volunteering around's a REALLY good way to make up for what the storms have done! And how about that, he's Stronk now. Perhaps he could give Cole a gun show, if you know what I mean?

Ohh, he's gonna talk to Nya! And already his interactions with her seem so much healthier; I'm glad.

Aheheh. Yeah, to an outsider, the premise would be preeetty wild. Don't blame Nya there.
But one way or another, it's out now! I'm proud of Jay. And I can totally understand Nya not getting it entirely, but they're friends again and that's what I'm glad for.

Aaooohh boy. I'd totally forgotten Jay and Kai haven't really met each other thus far. This should be interesting. And I hope we get to see Zane come to life eventually! That'd be great.

I WOULD ALSO POINT OUT THE MOTORCYCLE, TO BE FAIR. He's trying, at least.
I love how he says, point-blank, that Kai makes him nervous. Get the feeling that his ego's eating that right up.
Ouch. Kai didn't take the shake.

Kai's lines, I'm laughing. I read them in his voice, they're so HIM. Hopefully they can get to be friends soon enough!

AH, YES, COLE. JAY FINALLY ASKED HIM, HE RETURNS THE FEELINGS, I AM SCREAMING. Everything has led up to this, whoo! I love them tentatively deciding to try this and see where it goes!

(Side note, I LOVE Rocky being a comforting presence, even as just a truck. That's GREAT.)

This chapter was such a satisfying way to wrap up the lingering aftermath of the conflict! I really can't wait to see where this goes next :0

IT HAS HAPPENED

THEY ARE OFFICIALLY DATING

I AM SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW, THIS CURED MY DEPRESSION

this was perfect. jay trying to make up for his mistakes is amazing, not many people would do that, you captured his character perfectly! it's about time he asked out cole though smh and made amends with nya and befriended kai. anyways long story short, this is amazing and this chapter is incredible aghhhh uwu

WELL HOO NELLIE IT'S ABOUT TIME I REVIEWED THIS CHAPTER.
OKAY WHERE DO I START?
OTHER JAY... DIED!? WOW WELL. well... holy that's a lot to take in not gonna lie. Literally /died/ in front of his other self.

But AH Jay at the end! That's a lot to deal with buddy, but it's alright :) ya got good friends that are willing to stay by your side... on that note, I also hope Nya's alright when she wakes up X3

Gawsh, I want a friend like Cole. He is just way too kind. I love him. AHHH. "One step at a time, Jay." Probably my favorite line in this chapter.

I do cant wait for the next chapter! And hrrrh I'm beginning to think that this story is getting close to it's end :')