This was so much better than the show. Loved it brilliantly done!

AHHHH that was amazing, nice idea having Lin went to spirit world to meet Iroh instead of go to the acupuncture. and awwwww toddler lin was soooo cute! I hope you can make a sequel after this, i want to see more, especially Lin and Su's little talk, i kinda dissapointed since Su never really directly apologize with the scar on Lin's face in the show. i hope you will make it happen. great fict anyways!

AHHHH that was amazing, nice idea having Lin went to spirit world to meet Iroh instead of go to the acupuncture. and awwwww toddler lin was soooo cute! I hope you can make a sequel after this, i want to see more, especially Lin and Su's little talk, i kinda dissapointed since Su never really directly apologize with the scar on Lin's face in the show. i hope you will make it happen. great fict anyways!

Wow, I haven't read a fanfiction story in years since I started writing. Today I realized how much I missed it.
I really liked your story, the characters sounded accurate, the dialogue was great. Everything was just great. :)

Baby Lin was cute too. You're a much better writer than me, and this was a great read. I always did want to know more about the situation with Su and lin's face, since they never really addressed in-depth how Suyin felt. It was nice to see that come out in your story. Before this review turns into an essay, I will end it here. You did a great job.