Ah yes. Most stories fail to entertain this single, important question: How Much Ass was kicked before the end?

the characterization is spot on,and the premise is interrising hope you continue it

nice history

great story

ok, ok, I have to say, it's very good.
At first it seemed to me that the characterization of Alucard was very successful and well done.
I think you could have added a little more detail in some parts for more depth, but it's just my opinion, I think it's great
second you gave a good hooked to both plots, I have to say that I had also thought of something like that.
Third, have you thought about Akira joining Hellsing? if so, Ryo would be very against.
And finally if you need help you can ask me, I have worked with Devilman before.
bye

Welcome back to the land of living (or the dead), 336. It's been a while since you've posted and therefore a long post is only fitting.

Having followed you since your AvSDM days, you have improved greatly in the SPaG department as there are no glaring errors to be found. At least, at first reading. So, this review will focus solely on the plot and characters of the story.

For the plot, you've got a nice hook not too far into the chapter. The pacing is also good as the mix of action, description and dialogue are in near equilibrium. The detail is just nice as it is enough to describe the surroundings to the reader but vague enough so that a surface-level fan of both fandoms can still comfortable.

The characterisation is also done well here as they feel like how they act in the canon. The only criticism I have, a nitpick because I can't be all praises, is that some characters aren't given enough description for those not familiar with either fandom to follow. Again, it is a nitpick and the general assumption is that anyone clicking this should be familiar with the fandoms already.

All in all, good work!