That was amazing.

*sob* I'm going to miss this story. Please write a sequel! I want more Lucy/Van/Freed time and more Lucy and Hestor actually getting along time!

That‘s exactly the kind of relationship between Lucy and Hestor i wanted to see. Since i am not a big fan of his and i prefer the way you wrote him and Lucy. Since he often gets portrayed as much stronger and knowledgable than her and he gets away with anything. So the way you wrote him warmed me up to him a bit

You did a great job Blas! Going on my favourite list. Glad you had fun writing this, I agree too much anst can detract from a great story. Stay safe, have fun coming up with your next literary idea!

Wonderful story

WHU!? it is over? But...oh well. Happiness with how you did tie it all up. Grendace being outmaneuvered and tricked. and then Freeing Zen, which lord above thank you. and them being friends. and Vander getting 2 for the price of 1 and all that happy. loved it. But whatever happened to ... Natsu after he as led astray?

Kaleb and Erik arguing like old married couple.

Rereading to get to the new chapters. I do like your Natsu from the A/N a few chapters ago. Read your note about Hestor just now and I also don't really like him. Some of Desna's stories in progress present him a bit better. I have been waiting to see his ass handed to him for challenging Lucy for her keys. Hope that's coming soon!

I really love the way you're switching between more intense and fluffy chapters, it makes for very enjoyable reading. Thanks!

This had me smiling, giggling and smothering my snort of laughter. and the ending was awesome as fucK. Thank you for the update darling Blas.

wow fabulous chapter, poor Hes his world just turned upsidedown after a spin cycle.

Good lord, i love this story. Your cliff hangers are making my soul shrivel a bit. I hope you update soon!

Oh, shivers aplenty my dear Author! I mean seriously, shivers and people bumps all over my body. this was a serious conversation that was executed expertly. And I like that they had a neutral moment. I hope that they may (in your story) have a tentative friendship or acknowledgment of the other without too much animosity.

I think in a way they are both a lot alike while being each others polar opposites. And OH please HESTOR TAKE THIS and RESEARCH THE EVER LOVING FUCK OUTTA IT!

I am simply loving this fic! I think it is a very good balance of Lucy and Hestor. No one is perfect, no complete bashing of either. Both have their faults and good traits and are both evolving and growing. I can't wait to read more!
P.S. I can't wait for more Lucy/Freed/Van time xxx

trouble on the horizon! LOL, looking forward to the next