I really wish there’s Ace and Luffy POV every other chapter or at least after each letter...

Love this! Can’t wait to see what happens next!

Good update thanks and Sabo is still learning I wonder if he will give Dragon grey hair

Yes Please! I know it hasn't been too long, but I felt that this fic suddenly crawled out of a hybernation pod! I missed it and would still love to read more about it! :D

And The Sabo and Koala banter! I liked Koala's cheeky- witty lines. The one where Sabo asked what his hat had done to get knocked off his head! I love a Koala that responds like an annoyed big sister! :D
Also I just noticed, but incognito info gathering rule requires a person to make-up names. So in the future you should plan to give Sabo and Koala fake names so that they can keep their identities secret. :D Or to incite real confusion, Sabo should take Stelly's name and make it seem like Stelly works for the Revs. :P Joke, don't do that. This is your fic. :D Sabo was soooo charming here, i could just imagine how much of a sore thumb he stuck out in Sabaody. It's almost hillarious!

Once again, keep up with the update! :D

how those scumbags hurt sabo's friend like that and what is powerful devil fruit? and does this mean sabo have devil fruit?.

good luck sabo. :)

Aww, I bet ace and luffy loved to tease sabo about Koala very much and sabo are sure you're not adopted? and you are secret D too like ace and luffy and law?.

nice job on this chapter. :)

well done with this chapter.

thank you for making this One piece Story and am glad that Dragon saved Sabo and Sabo Remembers his brothers.

I wonder what the fruit is.

I love this take on Sabo PLEASE WRITE MOOOOOOOOOOORE! *dies inside*

aw so sad...are you gonna update?

This is really great!

A great story, keep up the good work.