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kyekye chapter 6 . 8/13 This is a really good story but I really hope this isn't a harem fic That is kind of a turn off I'd still read it but It would kill some of the enjoyment for me. personally I would rather Luffy be single with a lot of girls crushing on him than any thing at all still awesome story though |
Misaka Phenex chapter 6 . 7/12 im waiting for our pirate empress to kick the door down and announced herself as luffy wife hahahaha harem |
4 chapter 6 . 6/24 Great chapter, glad you are continuing! |
yuzukikuran476 chapter 3 . 6/23 looks like luffy is going to be in stock. |
yuzukikuran476 chapter 2 . 6/23 well done with this chapter the whole world is in shock. :O |
PandakaiLove chapter 6 . 6/17 Looks at the chapter, reads it, reads it again, and again. Ok, that was great, seriusly great. Is it wrong of me to be cheering on Shirahoshi to become her own pirate captain and making the world government shit themselves at a pirate having one of the most powerful weapons in the world? That would be wonderful, and the worst thing for them would be that due to her beauty and naivite (or however you spell it) the world would fall in love with her and it would be like Boa Hancock 2.0. Oh my god, Hancock, she's going to murder the Charlottes. Oh god at the end of this Big Mom will only be a speck of dust on the floor, it's just, the straw hat alliance, the whitebeards, GARP (who is a one man army lets be honest) and most importantly a pissed off straw hats. It's just wow. While I loved the episode to bits, something that I must point out is my dissapointment at the enemy you're creating, while I must admit that our protagonists crushing their enemies easily is my jam and carried out with comedic brilliance, it does make the enemies seem underwhelming and as a whole a bit flat and unthreatening. While I do understand that by making them more powerful the story would loose a bit of it's main driving force, I do think it's necessary since in the end the fights will end up being a bit predictable. But who knows, maybe you'll smack me with the fish known as 'you're wrong' and I'll eat my words. Something I must say though is that I hope with all my heart that Katakuri ends up more or less whole at the end of this, he quite frankly doesn't deserve the family he got and deserves to be the donut seller he always deserved to be. Anyways, I hope that you're keeping yourself safe and following your own advice on reading fanfiction and staying inside, I wish you the best of luck in this turbulent times and inspiration for this story to continue. Keep up the good work dude! PandakaiLove |
Uday Sra chapter 6 . 6/16 good |
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 6 . 6/15 I like it! |
Blackstriker94 chapter 6 . 6/15 Hey wonderful chapter although I do wonder what Whitebeard will do. Will he face Kaido on Wano or try to save his new son from his monster of a biological mother? Also will D waves of time be updated ever? It was one of my favorite One Piece fics. |
StrongGuy159 chapter 6 . 6/15 Amazing chapter continue please. |
Trjz chapter 5 . 5/26 This story is awsome thank u for writing it |
Guest chapter 5 . 2/14 This is amazing keep it going |
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 5 . 10/24/2019 I love it! |
fallenthantos chapter 5 . 5/25/2019 Well this looks like it will change things quite a bit? :) can't wait to see how it continues. |
Guest chapter 5 . 5/20/2019 I'm loving this story. btw, Law's op-op fruit should be able to deal with kaido with minor difficulty seing as he controls all within the room. |