Can't wait to read more. I love this story! It's so good.

This has been fun to read so far. Being blunt, your grammar and punctuation could use some work, but your writing style is on-point. You seem to be adhering to the Canon universe (I'm a Harry Potter fanatic) pretty well so far so I'm looking forward to seeing what comes up next. The two holding off on mating is dangerous and unnecessary, especially at this point in the story. Just throw up a Muffliato and notice-me-not charm and get busy, girls! Lol

I enjoyed reading this chapter. I love that Fleur and Hermione still have each other, and some calm, love, and support in the middle of the war.

Good story!

Hope you will have time for updates.

He reminds me of a certain sparkly vampire with his self-absorbed deluded attitude.
You need to write everything in English and pretend that she is talking with an accent. please.
Should have had sex then it would not hurt when she leaves.
So Ronald really thinks his plan of being the best friend is gonna to get him the girl even though one,she isn't interested and two. she is mated to Fleur. So what his he going to do once he finally figured out he never had a chance?

Since she is with Fleur how will the Malfoy mansion and the shell cottage events go?
Will you be skipping over them and be putting your own spin on the story?
Also when will they be bumping uglies to finish the mating? Surely they won't be doing it in the tent with the boys around
Hermione would never do that since she is too much of a prude,that is until after the first time she gets layer in all get are off
I never understood why it was just the three of them that went on this trek since it would have been better to have the numbers for more safety considering all of the snatcher gangs running around.. then when you're young you believe that you are invincible.

She keeps going at this so damn wrong.
So Ronald has finally realized he will never be getting into Hermione's pants like he thought.

It really does not matter what the other two have to say they cannot be apart. Ronald won't like it at all but he really has no way in the matter.

What is she going to do about the hunt they are going on soon?
I can see it will be very uncomfortable since we all know that Ronald is going to be an asshole about the whole Hermione being mated to Fleur thing. unless they complete the mating there is no way in hell that she will be able to leave without Fleur.
Things are going to get very interesting to say the least.

Did Ginny's dislike of Fleur stem from jealousy because she is so much more beautiful then her?
I am curious if the attraction between Ronald and Hermione is only one way and she keep telling him its not happening between them no matter how much him and mommy want it to happen?
Was it due to her age that the mating mojo did not kick in when they first saw each other her fourth year?

Thanks for the update! I really like this story.

So sick of Hermione always playing peacekeeper. Grow up and let Ron and Harry make their own mistakes.

love it! look forward to the updates!

I'm so glad to seean update! Events that brought it about suck, but I'm still really happy this isn't dead in the water!