Well first of all, this is an awesome fic! I can’t wait to hear more from ya!
Second, I absolutely loved the way you did Peter’s Spider-Man reveal to MJ! It was so good!
Third, you’ve done a great job at keeping the characters in character with how they are in the movies which is a hard thing to do but it makes fan fiction really worth reading.

All in all, this is a very good story (stories lol). Keep up the great work!

Oooooh! This is awesome. I cannot wait for more!

YESSS!
Peter Parker's back in business!
I love how another classic Spider-Man villain is coming back, at a point in Peter's life where he needs Spider-Man the most!

God the way you write Doc Ock just makes my skin crawl. I don't know why, but I imagine him to have the voice of Tom Kenny's Octavius from the Ultimate Spider-Man animated series. Keep writing. I missed this story when it was without updates for a while.

I'm sitting here in my living room with my parents on the opposite couch trying very hard not to sob.

I'm crying, I'm certain my face is red and i read this tearjerker of a story.
I wish we get to see that.
I wish everything will still be a masterpiece after endgame.

Thank you for this story.

It was very beautiful

Oh, just break my heart why don't you

Whoaaaaaaa that was really intense! Great job!

Great chapter!

Great chapter! xD Just realized that I’m also following this one on Wattpad.

great ch

nice job

nice ch

awe

love

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