| Reviews for Heartache |
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Daniela HC chapter 1 . 3/25/2018 You broke my heart again with this! I don't know how you make me feel sad and happy too. I really love that scene between Kanan and Hera because it shows how her dedication to the rebellion affected her relationship with Kanan. And like always is a pleasure to read Jacen and Hera stories. Perfect job |
ZeroBelow26 chapter 1 . 3/22/2018 I'm just gonna go over here in the corner, sit down, and cry my eyes out, don't mind me. Fantastic work |
Kgirl1 chapter 1 . 3/22/2018 Awwwwwwww. Really, really sweet. Nicely done :) |
ruby throne chapter 1 . 3/22/2018 "She hadn't paid any attention to Kanan at all, really, until his hand grazed her inner thigh and she jumped nearly out of her skin. How could he think she'd want to—at a time like this?" We all think that we have time and that other things are the important ones, until there is no time left for what really matters. And it is bittersweet that Kanan seemed preoccupied. I don't say that he knew at that moment what was coming, but he, at least, knew that the time was limited and life must be lived. As always when you write the two of them, they feel perfect together, At the same time, it is so motherly of Hera to worry about her child, and yet I love that, in the end, she understands and accepts that she can't worry from now for things that will come and can't be avoided. |
Lau-SR chapter 1 . 3/21/2018 Crying with her. Beautiful as always! |
All Things Animated chapter 1 . 3/21/2018 Good job! |
Guest101 chapter 1 . 3/21/2018 You're an amazing person! Don't let anyone tell you otherwise. And your writing reflects that-this was so good, as always. Keep it up! |
GreyWolf93 chapter 1 . 3/21/2018 Hmmmm...this is giving me some inspiration for an older Jacen (maybe late teenage years) going through some trouble, and it builds and builds until he admits, brokenly, that he wants his father. |
WestwardGlance chapter 1 . 3/21/2018 Oh good gravy. That was a lot of emotions to unpack in a short bit of prose. As usual you do the best Hera, but your probably tired of hearing me say that! Keep it up! I aways look forward to these. |
springfieldbluebird chapter 1 . 3/21/2018 Girl, you’re breaking my heart and I love it so much! Great little scene! |