That was intense. I felt everyone's feelings. And I am sure it was rough writing it.

I like the fact that Natsu didn’t have anyone who would served him as scapegoat. That kind of situation happens and he (everybody, in fact) has to learn coping with it. It’s the same thing with the scars, specially girl’s. They don’t fret over boy’s scars as much even when they mean the same.

Anyway, I’m rambling and not even in my language. Summing up, I liked your story. Thank you for sharing it with us!

Great story.

I would seriously love a part two about what happened next! About Levy having the baby(ies), Lucy and natsu asking others for sex advice, natsu and Lucy's first time, telling the guild about there relationship, did they get their rhythm back for fighting together, when does happy find out about their love, how does he feel about it, does she start letting her scar show like it's normal or does she go buy the more covering clothes, etc etc. I'm left with many questions and lose ends so I'd really love a part 2. Other that that this was well written and perfectly matched how they would think and act, so it is now one of my favourites. Thank you for writing it.

Although it would be great to read an epilogue!

I love this so far! And I have to say based on how you described Lucy's rescue, it seemed like it would have been Natsu who found her so it took me by surprise it was Jellal! Nice twist!

I loved this story!

Haha cute

Absolutely fantastic all the way through.

Loved it. Absolutely wonderful.

Just wanted to say well done. I have written several scenes like this and know how hard they can be, and yours is excellent.

One of the best and realistic nalu fics I've read, I really loved the remark of natsu being sentimental bc thats so true, yet I rarely see that being shown in fics, awesome story all around and it didnt have to be M. All in all amazing, hope to read more of your work!

I really loved this one. you have such talent that it makes me wish this was fleshed out more. but I understand the need to write out a quick shot. great job.

Wonderful! I love the dynamic between them. You know they want more. The kicker here is the roll reversal on the recklessness and act now ask later. Thank you so much for the ride.

great chapter!
I liked the end!
it seemed appropriate with the way things were going
I absolutely love the way you write Natsus emotions!it's like we can feel what he's feeling!

Really enjoying this. Looking forward to Lucy and Natsu's heart to heart talk next chapter.