Reviews for Hidden Harry
Addictorator chapter 2 . 7/14
I love this, a fic that is lighthearted, proving OP Harry stories can be fun too with the right author. Honestly, one of my fav stories out there and it's just two chapters so far. I like how Harry didn't even know how powerful he was, it's hilarious to see everyone else reacting to it. Hope to see more of Harry's shenanigans, and keeping it cracky.

The best part of this story to me, surprisingly enough, is how McGonagall reprimanded Harry and gave him detention for swearing, with Harry acknowledging it. Too many OP Harry stories have Harry being always in the right, never being punished even if he claws someone's face off, because he is either the heir of the founders or he was provoked verbally which of course justifies mauling your classmate to death. Harry was still subject to the school rules as any other student, he swore, was reprimanded, and he accepted it too instead of going all F THE SYSTEM. I like that. A Harry that's OP but humble when needed and not flaunting his power against justified use of authority.

Also I do hope even if Harry tries to teach it, nobody can replicate Harry's unique skills, like flying. I was oh so disappointed when I thought Luna was going to learn to fly, glad that isn't the case. Usually OP Harry means some sort of power sharing and OP Harem.

Also I like what you've done with Luna. Instead of the spaced out quirky girl who says strange stuff, which is fine too, it's interesting to finally see a different depiction. No matter the story, Luna is always this sort of daydreaming head in the clouds character, which some chalk it down to being a seer, or a mask to hide her real self due to bullies or trauma from the death of her mother, but never seen a story where it isn't there at all. This Luna is blunt, but also assertive, and serious when needed like questioning Harry. Also shows a journalistic streak, which makes sense considering her father owning The Quibbler. It's different, I like it.

Overall great story, keep it up, can't wait for an update. I'm hooked by the second chapter, glad I gave this story a try even though I normally tend to read those a bit longer in length by the time I start. Also hope there won't be as large a gap as between chap 1 and 2 for your next update!
D72 chapter 2 . 6/29
Bet Luna didn't see that one coming, Heh.
D72 chapter 1 . 6/29
I think I particularly like this because so many authors go fanon with Luna and have her be the seer to end all seers.

Her just dropping a WHAT THE FUCK is a breath of fresh air.
Sundown17 chapter 2 . 6/25
Very impressive. I found myself laughing several times.
dav15 chapter 2 . 6/24
you need to put a warning in the summary saying this is a bash fic you have it marked a funny story but all I see is super harry is good anyone who disagrees is an evil retard
digbygreen chapter 2 . 6/23
Seriously OP Harry. No theory just power. Can he teach Hermione and Luna? Thanks for writing.
kewr69 chapter 2 . 6/22
Great concept, great story so far
BYoshi1993 chapter 2 . 6/22
I like this fic. It doesn’t take itself too seriously. I look forward to what Harry will do in the tournament. It could be this grand spectacle or just be a paragraph. I think I’d be happy with both to be honest.
Zentari2238 chapter 1 . 6/22
It's a crackfic without actual humor.
katmom chapter 2 . 6/22
So much fun! Thanks for sharing.
bounders 12 chapter 2 . 6/22
Plz plz update soon
ZelotOneShotter chapter 2 . 6/21
some of the funniest stuff I've ever read, my hats off to you for this marvelous piece of work.
one suggestion though, spacing out on new lines when someone talks would ease the reading a whole lot, some of the heavy blocks of text are easy to get lost in.
Can't wait to read more, however long that may take
Carlyn858 chapter 2 . 6/21
Awesome ! Please keep going!
chuysaurus chapter 1 . 6/20
Wow, you have got a gift for turning a phrase. those descriptions of the other champions' inner monologues had me rolling. 11/10, hope to see additional chapters of this gold
Xerzo LotCN chapter 2 . 6/20
hey this updated neat
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