| Reviews for He stared at her like she was the sun |
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   username69420 chapter 4 . 9/27/2018 Amazing story |
| JustNerdyEnough chapter 2 . 5/9/2018 My favorite line (so far) about Marinette: She never offered false warmth. Something about that struck me. I like the style! |
| SilvershadowDimensional chapter 3 . 4/3/2018 OH MY GOD! HOW ARE YOU SO AMAZING?! I think I just died at the amazingness that is this fanfiction. THANKYOUUUUUU! 333 -Sil :D |
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/1/2018 So lovely |
| destinyrays023 chapter 3 . 3/31/2018 This is beautifully written. I love how poetic and intricate it is so far. Please continue, I'd love to read more :') |
| I Made A Review chapter 2 . 3/22/2018 Touching. Another rhyme hidden in the prose just pounced on me and I just took it home. Suggestion? I guess a reveal is all that may be left. Probably something on the irony of the metaphores, since the moon actually reflects the sun's light but in this particular case the inverse it true. Small typo: You have "back" (in her rays) instead of "bask". |
| CeceTheFandomQue chapter 2 . 3/22/2018 This was really good! I loved, "She was beauty, she was grace, she belonged in outer space." |
| SilvershadowDimensional chapter 2 . 3/22/2018 I think I just died at the sheer beauty that is this piece... ITS SO GOOOOOD! OH MY GOD! YOU ARE AMAZING! THANK YOUUUUOU! :D (sobs at beauty) CLAWTASTIC! -Sil |
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/21/2018 Beautiful. I'm just stunned about how amazing this is |
| mayuralover chapter 2 . 3/22/2018 I'm utterly in love with this. Your writing giis light and so elegant. I love this. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/21/2018 "She was bold, confident, beautiful, brave. She was perfect. She was like the sun. But somehow, in some way, she wasn't the only one." Rhyme just hit me like a ton of fluff. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/21/2018 Amazing absolutely amazing! I feel like this is how his thoughts will be. |
| SilvershadowDimensional chapter 1 . 3/20/2018 OH MY GOD! THAT WAS SOO GOOD! I can't wait for the next partttt! -Sil :D |
