I've noticed in several chapters that Nathaniel's son Ezra is often misspelled as Erza. The spelling are so close that it can be hard to see the difference... but I thought you ought to know.

WAIT SO AFTER ALL THIS TIME YOU STILL REMEMBER ME AH I HAVENT READ FANFICS SINCE THAT COMMENT iM cRyInG

I can't tell if you are or aren't setting up Adrienette. On the one hand, you built it up quite nicely in the beginning, and we can see how it could sort of work here, especially if Adrien can redeem himself in the eyes of his Lady.
But that's where the other hand comes from. Adrien here (story & chapter) is portrayed as a d*ck-thinker who cares little for other people's feelings and wouldn't have bothered with Marinette again if it weren't for Emma.
I always understood Adrien as someone who needed to learn how to make some callous choices, since he is too concerned with hurting anyone. You might bring up the times where he seemed to put Marinette's feelings on the back burner, but most of that is due to lacking/false information. Either he doesn't know that her feelings are being hurt, or he was told that she felt differently by people (incl. herself) whom he assumes would be honest about the matter. He can be sensitive about preventing hurt feelings, but when they already are, he flounders.
Luka is a complicated subject here. While I do like him having an inner conflict about Marinette waiting so long to reveal herself to him, I'm still confused why she'd do it at all. How did she come to the conclusion that him knowing was safer than otherwise? Since that is her big reason for keeping mum in cannon. Or is it really an attempt to force herself into Luka's direction, because she doesn't know that Adrien *is* the father, that he *wants* to be the father, and that his feelings for her go beyond physical attraction? Because she definitely still feels something for him, and I doubt it'd be hard for her to acknowledge that if she wanted to.
Regardless, I will read this to the end, because I want to know the rest and not leave myself hanging on an open end, especially on a story that is objectively quite good, if with the occasional flaw.

Now I'm excited. But one thing why Lukanette? I ship Marichat way too hard.

Thank you for the update :)

Holy smokes! Great story.
Looking forward to the next installment.

Lol! the cucumbers would only be affective against chat noir!

Wait Is a Lukenette or adrienette?

Okay, so I definitely would love a continuation of this please! I’m really loving your OC characters too. I think that Adrien is almost irredeemable but would love to see a final redemption arc for him. However, Marinette and Luka really suit each other down to the ground the way this story is going. Also, I never thought I’d say this but good luck, Lila!

Omg! I love this!

YYYAAAAAAYYYYYY! SO HAPPY
SO HAPPILY SAD, can't make up my mind. But Adrien's a bit of a mess.

I usually vouch for Adrien, but for this story, I'll make an exception. Luka has stood with her through thick and thin, while Adrien left her. Cold turkey. She should choose Luka.

So, apologies, but you lost me around Chapter 24. I understand from reading up to this point, that this appears to be an Adrien and Marinette pairing, but you suddenly introduce an Akuma without any build-up from Gabriel or Luka, just as an excuse to introduce him as a love rival? And then in the next, when Ladybug returns, you write her anger at his questioning whether she was ‘his ladybug’ and state that she was not his possession after ‘the incident with him abandoning her’. Now, while I understand her anger at Chat Noir, she had later learned she was pregnant with his child and faked her death as Ladybug, but never once does it seem in the chapters building up to this that she ever attempted to tell Chat that she was pregnant from his actions. She even stated she wasn’t innocent in the matter despite being the victim of a non-consensual sexual act.

I also partly understand Adrien’s selfish actions In not letting Marinette know about Luka, but you write him in these chapters like some fiend for sex as his only reason for not telling her, which seems to be uncharacteristic of how you portrayed him leading up to the Akumatization of Luka. I guess my problem is, not once did you set up her feelings for Luka as being a thing in all of her interactions with Adrien prior to this, and suddenly Luka shows up with a ring and she states she wants to ‘kiss that sad expression off his face. Even know the moment with Adrien still lurked in the back of her mind...’. Where was Luka when she had Adrien pinned down on the couch, kissing him without a care in the world. And then you do an heel-turn like that event meant nothing, and yet she didn’t even have Luka on her mind at all before that moment.

You write Marinette like she was always in love with Luka despite the separation due to work, Luka is introduced as little more than a plot-device for you to have a reason for Gabriel to become Papillion again, who then uses Luka as a knife in his son’s back, to take away his chance at happiness just because he had a shot to learn about the family he never had and potentially redeem himself and atone for his wrongs to Marinette. If you had written that as the reason for Marinette choosing Luka, learning he was Chat and then explaining why she could never love him, then maybe it would have been a better story. Why write twenty chapters of Adrien getting close to Emma, when you Change the stories direction?

I’m gonna just stop my ranting here, just because I don’t think this story is terrible, it just seems like you changed it when you were halfway into it. My only question, if only to satisfy my curiosity, is this: Why did you choose Luka for Marinette, over Adrien?

Maybe I just missed something, but I felt I had to write this out.

Yay keep going with updates!

I don't think my heart can take Cat's/Adrien's unhappiness assuming it won't really get better, I think I'm gonna stop here. I did enjoy reading this though. Good story telling/grammar and punctuation!