| Reviews for A Family Man: Birth of a Legendary Medic Ninja |
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steellord chapter 2 . 5/30/2018 great story cant wait for more |
Willson18 chapter 2 . 5/30/2018 Interesting story so far can't wait for more |
lgerry chapter 2 . 5/30/2018 This story is shaping up to be great, thanks for the update. |
Valkoinen chapter 2 . 5/30/2018 Easily one of the best start i've ever read for a fanfiction ! It's really fluid even in the time skips; the characters are well developed and their difficulties are believable. To sum it up a really great begining that in my opinion avoid the most common mistakes made by authors of naruto fanfictions and fanfctions in general. |
dfriel1996 chapter 2 . 5/30/2018 Don't add Sakura to the Harem add Yakumo Kurama instead she's really good character she's also really similar to Kushina especially in regards to her having a hard time being judged for housing the Ido that killed her parents and is treated like a prisoner in her own home. |
Ezeakel chapter 2 . 5/30/2018 nice. |
jbrew123 chapter 2 . 5/30/2018 Well I have to admit that for someone who only does this as a hobby, you write better stories than a Lot of other authors. Good to have you back and looking forward to future updates. Good luck with the job and with the writing. |
nanox876 chapter 2 . 5/30/2018 I think you should include those under consideration into the harem. Also could you include the Nanabi Jinchuuriki Fuu as she is a good choice with potential to be expanded upon? |
Jameslw chapter 1 . 5/20/2018 I think you should have naruto some how find out about the shadow clone jusu and start using it before he graduates early |
Jameslw chapter 1 . 5/20/2018 A great start to what I think could be a great story |
Tempest S chapter 1 . 5/7/2018 This is well written. I'm enjoying it. |
cy25 chapter 1 . 5/4/2018 Fresh idea, love it. Time skips are fine, good pace so far. Also I don't want to rush you but maybe you can make your chapters a bit shorter to update more frequently. Try to limit your harem though, it's near impossible to keep up a good story with too many girls, 7 is already too many in my opinion. |
rising1 chapter 1 . 4/9/2018 Naruto x Kushina all the way! |
bladetri chapter 1 . 4/6/2018 like XD |
Nova70 chapter 1 . 4/6/2018 I’m not a fan of the fact this will be a harem fic, but this is a very interesting and unique story so I’ll read it |