Reviews for More Than You Bargained For
spongeson chapter 4 . 6/27
omg I really REALLY love the direction of this story ! I had to take a quick break in between chapters to let u know LOL

Arnold going through a depressive period rly hits home as someone who suffers w clinical depression , my poor son. I can’t wait to keep reading UGH I love these kids they’re my babies 8’)
Brenda chapter 22 . 6/21
kawaiii solo tengo que decirte que me atrapo desde el primer momento reí , llore , me enoje muchas emociones juntas , me re encanto te felicito sigue así tienes un gran ingenio por crear historias nos vemos o leemos esta la próxima sensei
TheWonderfulShoe chapter 22 . 6/2
Very cute. Nice end! (Beginning?)
TheWonderfulShoe chapter 21 . 6/2
Whoa! That makes me happy, though. It broke my heart, a little, when he put those things away, never realizing there was a journal with the clue that could help them find the parents all along...
TheWonderfulShoe chapter 20 . 6/2
Thank goodness. XD That figures.
TheWonderfulShoe chapter 19 . 6/2
I guess those two mean well, anyhow.
TheWonderfulShoe chapter 18 . 6/2
Way behind him? Not ahead of him? Or with him? ...is this some newfangled slang with you young whippersnappers?
TheWonderfulShoe chapter 17 . 6/2
Oh good grief. Well...that's one way to be out with it. XD; Helga, you sure don't have a lot of self-control, do you? Not the , not now. Or is it impulse-control...?
TheWonderfulShoe chapter 16 . 6/2
I trust you, I do! But...just gonna cry over here until then. QQ
TheWonderfulShoe chapter 15 . 6/2
;-; *sob* Oh dear. This is rough. But...it's something. Maybe writing? I don't know if he would be the type to rip it up. I hope that he might read it, even if it took some processing. Maybe a public apology to correct the public humiliation? ...eventually, Helga, you have to come through the fears you have and be ready to move forward, if you want this to work. Obviously, something's gotta give...if you don't decide what, the decision will keep being made in outbursts until you don't get to decide anymore...
TheWonderfulShoe chapter 14 . 6/2
...some things are hard to make amends for. You better start facing this head on and coming to terms with what you did, what it means, and how to make things right.

As for Arnold...ouch. Poor thing. He was right that he had to get her alone. But maybe this situation will help her face that she needs to make a real change. I think you might need to come clean, Helga...about your feelings, your fears...all of it. And ask him to forgive you. And not be surprised and try to push through if he says it would take time to get over how you treated him. Especially knowing where his head has been, lately.
TheWonderfulShoe chapter 13 . 6/2
...ugh, Helga. *facepalm* That was a mistake, for sure...
TheWonderfulShoe chapter 12 . 6/2
Oof, feelings! They're tough.
TheWonderfulShoe chapter 11 . 6/1
Aww, that was super sweet and fun. I am a sap, so I am hoping things progress okay from here...but since there are several more chapters, I assume it'll be a little bit of a struggle, anyway! Still...I just want them to get their happiness. Haven't they both suffered enough? Part of me just wants to leave the suffering to real life, I suppose! XD Oh well. Very excited to keep reading soon!
TheWonderfulShoe chapter 10 . 6/1
Ooh goodness. How can you say "What could go wrong?" like that, and then have the AUDACITY to insist I won't be disappointed?! THIS SUDDENLY FEELS LIKE A TRAP. HELP. HELP! I AM BEING TRAPPED! D:
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