You shouldn't abandon this fanfic. Considering the fight between Hakuno and Shinji and Joker pulling out Arsene mid-fight. :) Will they save Shinji and Francis figuring out a way to break the rules or will they let them die?

I want to see more bonds between Hakuno and Ren. Like that of Social Link in Persona. As that is the best thing as it shows the character developments of the people that the Protagonists of Persona 3, 4 and 5 had bonded with.

I would love to see how their relationship evolve.

I do hope to Ren lead Hakuno to Victory for the Moon Cell War and be the leading Servant of a Faction.

Be awesome to see him summon Dragons like Kohryu, Angels like Metatron and Demons like Lucifer. And his ultimate Personas of his Fellow thieves and Satanael.

This is awesome, I hope to see the changes Ren will make along with Hakuno’s development.

You know should stop cutting off chapters like that, it makes it really hard for people with accounts to review again as they already have done it before you deleted the chapter.

Jeez, what the heck is Ren Alter trying to do by becoming God? Pretty sure the Original Ren would hate that.

A good chapter, I'm excited for the continuation of the fight between Joker vs Rider. Using the character of the prologue in the story was very interesting.

You plan to involve the whole Universe of Fate Extra but you forgot Fate Extra Last Encore, maybe Hakuno and Joker discover a secret dungeon and they will face Hakuno (Dead Face) and Nero in that secret dungeon or something.

A Joker (Alter) the idea is something incredible also I like the Team that Joker has. Jeanne (Alter), Ivan The Terrible, Sigurd, Suzuka Gozen (She remembers what happened Fate Extra CCC Fox Tail or Fate Extra Last Encore events), Ereshkigal, Morgan, Heracles and Yan Qing no doubt you used Servants very interesting.

You will continue with the Omake, I hope that hakuno wins the bet XD. What are the parameters of Joker, personal skills, etc.

There is an error in the chapter but it is repeated again, you should correct that.

1.-I like the idea that you use a character that only appeared in the prologue.

2.-It's ironic that Joker wants to be a God but it's a possible choice he could have made, besides it's not a bad idea.

3.-no comment.

4.-no comment.

5.-no comment.

6.-no comment.

7.- Joker is powerful, in my opinion the second most powerful Fool, the first is Minato for obvious reasons but Joker is the best at using words

Wow, who would thought the prologue character of Extra would be used by Archimedes. To be fair, the prologue character was never really memorable and was just like the many failures that never got the chance to fight in the Moon Cell Grail War until Hakuno appeared.

A Ren Alter? Dear lord, I don't think the normal Ren would like that, especially when he finds out his alternate self is trying to play god or become one.

Huh, I'm going to assume the dream that Hakuno have at the end of the last chapter is hinting Altera and now Archimedes makes an appearance.

Ren as the Ruler class Servant is a neat idea, heck I think more details on who the Servants are with the combination of his Persona, he would understand the opposing Servants capabilities without too much of a problem.

Be cool to see him fight them along with how well Hakuno bonds with him.

This is pretty cool. Sure the events are pretty much like that from Extra but that's because this is the beginning of the story and hell Ren's introduction is pretty much what I would expect from the stylish one of all the Persona Protagonist.

Would love to see what it would be like with Ren being Hakuno's Servant as well as being the leader of a Faction in Extella. It would be nice to see what his Servant Stat looks like..

1.- You know that you will have to explain each time you add a chapter like chapter 3.

2.- You are right in that. But if Akira / Ren was in Grand Order he would be of the Alter Ego or Foreigner class or maybe not.

3 .- That is somewhat confusing, I hope that Akira / Ren (Alter) recover Hakuno or Hakuno recover Akira / Ren.

4.- I hope that Akira / Ren (Alter) will be successful in his plan but if Akira / Ren's plan involves the seven deadly, the seven virtues will also be involved.

5.- Harem or not Harem depends on you as a writer to make the choice but if it is Harem then Joker is the only male member of the Harem XD (it's a good idea)

6.- What timeline are you referring to?

7.- Akira / Ren defeated a god with the Arcane Fool without using World Arcana. No doubt Akira / Ren is the best with the words and the most charismatic if we compare him with the other Fools

I will be totally honest not all readers know about Fate / extra and doing something like this only makes the story totally confusing, it is better to continue with the canon order (the first week).

I apologize if this comment bothers you

I’ll admit, I am confused with this chapter.

I don’t really understand what’s going on save for the fact that Archimedes has been messing around with his time sliding ability. And in one of the parallel timelines of Extella, Ren has own Faction and is becoming a God? I’m not sure how he does it.

Who was the guy that Archimedes captured?

The Servants that are with Ren Alter are all the Altered versions too?

How does the Sea of Souls work in this story?

What kind of effects would Ren's Ultimate Persona have on the Moon Cell? And how would Servants in the Extraverse react to it? Particularly those who are Saints, Kings, Demigods and Nameless?

Also will you do a Fate Grand Order one.