Oh my gosh, you need to continue this, I'm having a hell of a laugh see their reactions. I thought it'd start from the beginning like all the others I've seen so far and I was looking forward to them meeting kid Sabo and Ace but the way this fanfic is progressing is a pretty nice way to go at it. I can't wait until they get to Crocodile and all those other exciting parts. Like Luffy trying to eat Chopper or how he met Brrok the first time.

Gahhhhh, I want to click next but there’s not a next button yet D: this story is so good, I got sucked into it immediately and look forward to reading more

Yo, never liked "seeing canon stories", but loved yours.

The writing is great, the group characters chosen to participate are wonderful, make some great banter (wanted Buggy in there, but oh well) and are very in-character. Can't wait for more.

Aye i hope your still continuing this story
I really love it and i find it enjoyable to read

I love this story cant wait to read more though i had hoped that mihawk was in there as well ben and ohh well i kust hope i can read the next chapter soon.

I really love this fic! Thank you so much for the new chapter. Its really interesting seeing everyone witnessing the rise of the Straw Hat crew and the insanity that follows. I really think you have everyone characterized well.

I cant wait to read the next chapter. Pls. Update soon.

This is really good! I love how your story incorporates their memories too...like Kuina and Zoro’s duel...and not just what happens at the moment. It’s so entertaining to see what everyone thinks of the straw hats adventures, and I can’t wait for more! Amazing job!

This is a very good story so far I am excited for lugetown, Amazon lily, and thriller bark

wantt moreee

You’re Alive! I’ve been waiting for update for a long time and am glad you finally did. Keep up the good work :D

noice

XD me muero x ver que opinan de arlog o sanji :D queda tanto que ver, me encanta

Ummm... which version of One Piece are you using cause I just watched the anime and most everything that you had wrote happened differently, either what they said and what they did

Example, in the anime the Straw Hat pirates met Kaya at her mansion and Kuro made them leave, them the Hpyno Freak made Luffy fall off a cliff, then Straw Hats plus Ussop set up a trap to stall or even defeat the Kuro pirates, and then the meow meow thief brothers stole Zoro’s swords after Luffy got hpynoed again and got stuck under a piece of the Black Cat Pirate Ship, then the Luffy vs Kuro/Ussop, Zoro and the Ussop pirates vs Jango the Hpyno Freak and then afterwords Kaya started getting better and gave the Straw Hats Merry

Love this story! Its nice and to the point, need more stories like this here. Most of these types of stories often get discontinued, hope you continue!