| Reviews for Forgiven Pride |
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tanseynz chapter 7 . 8/29 I’m enjoying this story very much - the variations from canon are well thought out and the characters nicely manoeuvred. Maybe Jane should meet Bingham, but be very reticent given Mrs Bennet’s determination that she and Mr Darcy are a couple. After all, Jane hates to rock the boat... |
Hiniwalay chapter 7 . 8/20 Well, that is all up to you, my good author! With your skill at writing, we are bound to be pleased with whichever route you take. Personally, I think Jane and Bingley should meet already, but Bingley will for some time longer still have his cap on Elizabeth. (soooo in for jealous Darcy-Bingley interactions.) It will take some important flash of insight or perception to clear away the cloud and see the angelic Jane instead. As for now, I dearly hope you have more works to tide me over in the wait for the update D |
Hiniwalay chapter 6 . 8/20 Dear me, they shall never escape from Mrs. Bennet’s romantic aspirations now. |
Hiniwalay chapter 5 . 8/20 loving this! such a natural courtship! |
Hiniwalay chapter 4 . 8/20 I soooooo love your characterisation of Charles! That line about those of mild tempers not knowing how to deal with their anger, and his shaking hands immediately after he slams the door. Also. Also, I am cackling with glee. Bingley, you have a competitor in Darcy! |
Hiniwalay chapter 1 . 8/20 promising! and great writing! |
Levenez chapter 7 . 7/19 I have only come across you story and can only hope that you will find time and inspiration soon enough! I enjoy the mismatched pairings if I can say so but as well the competition that might start between the two friends? Or will the sisters sort it out for them? I am keeping my fingers crossed! |
MerytonMiss chapter 7 . 6/19 I think they should meet, then you can have a few chapters of the couples hanging out together in various events, but speaking at cross purposes and misunderstanding each other as every one tries to politely keep to plan A or move to Plan B in the most disorganized fashion. Mr. Bennet, or Charlotte, if not both, will see the problem and be very amused by it all. But ot helpful. |
Regency1914 chapter 7 . 6/9 I think it's about time that Bingley meets Jane. I'm curious as to his reaction. :) |
libaka chapter 7 . 6/3 Wonderful! Please have Bingley and Jane meet, I’d love to see his head spin at the thought of two beautiful sisters since he thinks Elizabeth so beautiful already. Also, loved that Caroline twisted her ankle after her rude comments earlier! |
Another Lizzie chapter 7 . 6/2 Please let them meet. I can't stand listening to Mrs. Bennet rail at Lizzy about Darcy! I'm enjoying it. Very good idea to let Darcy see what can happen because he did not deal with Wickham when he should have. |
Ortella chapter 7 . 6/2 Please, make them meet at last. It would be even interesting if Bingley had a faux pas towards Lizzy due to give his full attention to Jane, and Darcy has to step in to help Lizzy and stay near her during the dinner. |
liysyl chapter 7 . 6/1 Great story so far and it would be nice if they met. I hope you are well and will someday continue your awesome story. Thanks for sharing your twist and stay safe. |
SunriseImagination chapter 7 . 6/1 Uh yeah they should meet at last. Any other delays and the story would be very convoluted. |
tarlily chapter 7 . 6/1 Let them meet. The sooner he gets over Lizzy, the better...lol |