Reviews for Pay 1, take 2
GiGi chapter 6 . 8/6
Friggin beautiful! Love it! Wonderful! I'M CRYING!-SOOO CUTE *SQUEALS*
EveOfTheSun chapter 6 . 8/2
This was slightly funny, and mostly amazing. Great job! This was a very well-written story!
desiderata-girl chapter 6 . 5/10
Ok hear me out when I say that your fanfic is a MAS-TER-PIECE ! Like omg it was sooooooo worthing the work you put in it ! I almost cried twice while reading it. Like I'm sensitive but when baby Lance is hurt, I'm hurt ok ? T.T you did such an incredible work in this, really. Like I just finished Voltron today (I was so afraid when I saw and heard people talking about the last seasons that I was like trapped ? in season 5 since it was released) and once I did I was like "ok it's fine, I'm fine, I'll just gotta find some good fanfics to heal my broken heart, it's gonna be ok" and like I was kinda mad that they didn't get to really explore the concept of alternative reality. Like seeing Sven and Slav was cool, getting to see baby Lotor with a nice and gentle Zarkon brought tears to my eyes but, I really needed to see the all crew ! And that's why I'm so grateful for your fanfic. You did so amazingly. The way they meet their older engaged self, like it was EXACTLY what I wanted to see ! Two Lance and Keith confused by seeing other versions of themself happy together ! The way Lance struggle to accept his own feelings, his moving conversation with his mother. The moment he shared with Keith on the ugly planet. It was so well written. Like all the emotions were here ! And Keith's attitude god it was so close to the canon it hurt ! Like you want to know what's in his head omg ! Also I really really loved Alpha Lance and bun Keith, they were the sweetest together and on their own ! The chat with Alpha Lance was probably my favorite part ! Especially the moment when Lance finally accept his feelings and they're both exchanging about what they love about Keith. But mostly because we finally get to understand Keith better. Like it's so adorable that Alpha Lance gives all this details cause he's really intimate with Keith now and it shows.
Of course the final chapter was so worth it. Seeing them opening up urgh I love those moments ! And when Keith says to Lance that he is important URGH MY HEART like all the things he said were what I wished to see in the canon ! That was what Lance deserved ! So thank you so so much for making my dreams come true ! Also I love older Shiro, he really made me laugh ! XD
And Red damn that snarky bitch ! You can really be proud of your work. I got to spend a really good afternoon and evening thanks to you. It was nice being able to forgot my problems just for a few hours readind and seeing my sweet boys falling in love !
Faizaene chapter 6 . 2/6/2019
Oh wow, i am so fucking speechless... Plz make another chapter! Plzz! This is the most bestest-oh wait, is bestest even a word? Aw fricken nvm, anyways, where was i? Oh yeah! This is the most bestest story i have ever read! Plzz more!
Faizaene chapter 5 . 2/6/2019
If this also includes Klance, cant you make the young Keith and Lance kiss in one of the chapters? Im not trying to be mean but, sure its your choice but i do advise you to make them kiss in one of the chapters if this is pretty much a Klance fanfic...
Sahono chapter 6 . 1/2/2019
After the final season I totally needed some cute stuff ! I totally enjoyed. Older Voltron paladins are quite awesome, especially Shiro (he's too funny!) and our Lancey Lance !
Bye ~
Monkeysburn21 chapter 1 . 6/30/2018
older Shiro is my favorite character. OMG he is hilarious!
That1-fan-girl-yea chapter 6 . 6/26/2018
This was awesome, I could feel all the feelings. Just amazing
Pokeevee57 chapter 6 . 5/15/2018
Oh my gosh, the sweetness of this... *sob* I love it too much x3
Driope chapter 6 . 5/7/2018
Hello !
I like this fanfiction a lot, i think it has been well writing (but i'm not an expert ya know), and the development of the k/l relation was really enjoyable to read.
I kinda like the idea of time travel, particulary when it's about romance and that the main couple understand that they are a couple in the future... well, that's kinda the plot of one of mines, but in reverse. That's not a so original idea but I keep like it and there is always a way to do your own original story (and even the future-character is created by your own mind) with that pretty simple idea.

And, honestly, i found your future-team-Voltron awesome ! Lance looks, thanks to the description, pretty badass, and his mind is still quite the same despite the five years he has spend with Voltron (juste like all the orhers actually, but Alpha is quite more important in the fic (as Lance is the main character)). New-Shiro is pretty funny too, yelling insults and swearing every times he can... I think I have a thing for angry-yelling-characters. Bun-Keith is kinda cute, i'm absolutly sure that actual canon Keith would be really hot with a ponytail or a bun (more than how he already is, i mean). About Pidge, i'm curious tout know how they met the rebellion without Matt, and if she was at the Garrison or not. Because if she wasn't, how did they all end up there ? And something else, it's kinda weird to imagine Hunk with a beard... I'm confused, don't know if it's more funny or creepy or just Santa Claus like...
I dont talk a lot about Allura or about Coran here, because they were finally not so different as the ones we know, and because we didn't see them a lot in the story.

The way acts the red lion is so human, well I think the lions do have feelings and can understand their paladins' feelings, and maybe they comunicate with each other ? Red flying away to show his paladins they can get closer is so sweet and it shows that he cares about them :3 !

Well, i think i have nothing else, so it's time for me to say bye ?
Have a nice day, bye (: !
UnknownUserFound chapter 6 . 3/27/2018
I love the klance moments. and especially Shiros potty mouth
Guest chapter 6 . 3/27/2018
Awwwwwww too much cuteness I'm gonna explooooode nice story bye now:)

Bean
clicheholic chapter 3 . 3/23/2018
I'm done reading the story in ao3 and I love how the ending turns out to be :')

I agree with the guest tho. You should really check this chapter. But putting it aside, I love the story!
guest chapter 3 . 3/22/2018
uh i think there might be a glitch on this chapter?
Guest chapter 3 . 3/22/2018
WTF
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