Amazing

Cute 3 Is all I can say 3

That was super cute! Adrian is such a dork!

I think you should write more when you can as it is really paw same so for. Please and thank you.

Hmm, okay. So I was a little worried at first when I noticed it was all dialogue. I was all Noooooo, don't do that. Only those who are truly great with dialogue can get away with this. Otherwise it is a no no.

Then I saw your note and was relieved it was an experiment and to test yourself and grow, so I gave it a shot.

You actually did quite well. I wish I could I remember his name, but I had to read one short story in Uni from an author who is renowned for his dialogue. This had the same punch to it as that story. However, that may be the only thing to really note. Perhaps it was simply how I read it that made it punchy. And I don't know that punchy was right for the flow of this drabble.

Good job.

This.
THis.
THIS
IS
PARADISE.

Hehe I lied. THIS is my new favorite one-shot!

This was good for an all dialogue piece and it was kind of funny.

Lol XD

Oh that was adorable. These one shots of yours are great!

This was nifty! I think it's hard to do scene changes in all-dialogue fics, but you've handled the process reasonably well.