Reviews for Eternal
Spartan Captain chapter 23 . 7/13
I hope you keep Percy as single or with Artemis in the next story. Also I hope Zoe is kept alive in the rewrite too.
1Wolf1 chapter 22 . 7/12
Done
Ruudog chapter 23 . 6/25
As someone who just found and read eternal, I was just want to say thank you for the updates, as in what your plan is for the story. I think people forget that nobody is making you do this, so I’m thankful you just didn’t drop the story without a word. I’ve enjoyed all of it so far and look forward to any possible stories. Do whatever you feel is best.
Guest chapter 23 . 6/23
gods damnit I'm sad now maybe try a sequel like a full fledged one you could probably ask some writers to help cause that cliffhanger seems like what would end a story
dextron11 chapter 23 . 6/19
This is an awesome story. Even though Percy is OP it doesn’t matter because of the greater focus on his character. These people feel like an actual dysfunctional family instead of a bunch of cookie cutters. Also, thank you for making Theseus a genuinely cool character. Far too often in immortal Percy stories the replacement son of Poseidon is either weak or a douchebag. It’s refreshing to see someone take the time to actually make him someone we can like without detracting from Percy.
Guest chapter 23 . 6/13
Hi, I know you're going to rewrite this but I only just found it a couple days ago and I wanted to thank you for it, I personally really like the idea and I love your writing style so you know, just so you have that positive feedback since sometimes authors only get negative reviews.
I think it's your decision to stop with this story and rewrite it and everyone should respect it, I'm sure the rewrite will be just as great and don't stress about how long it takes, these are your stories and you have to enjoy writing them first and foremost, if that means you focus on other things first that's fine (and filii decorum is also a masterpiece so it's probably time-consuming).
Thank you for all your amazing work!
Thalorighan chapter 23 . 6/7
I liked this
Jaredkenway chapter 23 . 5/16
Im excited for the new stories! While I'm disappointed about eternal I understand the need to move on. Thanks for the awesome FanFiction.
NightMartyr chapter 23 . 5/12
such a great story, can only anticipate the rework.
before now, I've never read anything with this idea, now that I have, I don't regret it.
NightMartyr chapter 23 . 5/12
we send unto them, only you. your strength their shield, your will their sword. you remain unbroken; for your fight, is eternal.
Guest chapter 6 . 5/8
Good job on writing these kinds of stories. You did fucking amazing. There are very fewer stories like these on , the ones that are actually good are Anaklusmos14, you, and some others. I love all your stories, especially Son of Neptune. Keep up the good work.
IROCK108 chapter 21 . 5/6
noice.
Thefanfictionfollower chapter 23 . 4/26
I just binged both stories in this “percy-verse” and I have to say your writing style is really good. It’s rare to find good stories and to find one so well done but what seems to be overlooked by readers is just criminal to be honest, you definitely deserve more views, favorites, and follows.

I do hope you get to finish this project because your storytelling, world building, and characterizations are really interesting to read. I’ll be eagerly waiting for your revival of this story and will be reading your other story selections in the meantime.

Cheers!
fudgefight chapter 23 . 4/13
Excited for the rewrite!
PurpleArrowhead chapter 18 . 4/10
I think I just witnessed the fates becoming psychiatrists
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