Reviews for Missing Moments
Arnel 63 chapter 3 . 2h
This is the sort of thing that endeared Ron to me in the first book. Not only have Molly and Arthur taught their sons to befriend those in need, but to also those needs before their own. Ginny's reaction to Hedwig belonging to Harry was priceless.
Arnel 63 chapter 1 . 2h
It seems these missing moments can stand alone as one-shots. This one tears at my heartstrings because it's so easy to plug this story into canon. I really feel for Remus and can see how he's still denying himself happiness in the later books because encounters like this one have shaped who he becomes. Well done.
Arnel 63 chapter 19 . 7/30
What a fun chapter. I especially liked how Harry turned the tables on the boys and convinced them that they needed to support their sister. I also really like how Harry and Ginny converted the roof into a play space; it's a great idea. I'm glad the boys were willing to share their experience with Teddy. Nicely done.
santoskamilla.14 chapter 19 . 7/29
É simplesmente adorável! kkkkkkk
Escrito com perfeição
Seriously Sam chapter 19 . 7/29
Teddy being the best big brother. My heart.
Brothers!
Oh he crossed his arms. Dad lecture coming on
Aweeee lily supporting her big bro’s. They def gotta support her!
Purple glasses for Lily? Are they sparkly too like in my stories? :)
Yeah, Harry, move your hips!
Harry singing to Ginny! Be still my heart.
"That's what makes you beautiful!" James sang, high-fiving Albus as they moved into the next dance sequence. - omg I love it! He’s so into it now!
Oh yes! Show teddy! He’d love to be mirror called and see them all dancing!
Teddy called her mum!
X.pix.X chapter 19 . 7/29
Beautiful
TheDistantDusk chapter 19 . 7/28
Ok this is absolutely precious. I love how you include music in your fics! Super cute 3
alix33 chapter 18 . 7/28
Yum! at the thought of that shepherd's pie Molly gave Ginny and Harry.
Confession: I have never in my 49 years and just over two months of life watched a single episode of Friends.
AW! at Teddy wanting a hug from his Auntie Hermione so badly.
HG4EVER69 chapter 18 . 7/28
Good chapter. The dursleys should feel lucky Ginny hadn't killed them yet.
hpfangal chapter 18 . 7/28
Haha I love this! My father does the man cold thing to a t, but my husband is much more like Harry, just powers through until he crashes.
X.pix.X chapter 18 . 7/28
Oh wow, he’s one stubborn person
Seriously Sam chapter 18 . 7/28
YAY! Harry loves coffeeeeeeee
Awe poor cabbage is falling asleep in the shower!
She helped him with his tie!
He needs to leave work and sleep.
Is Teddy living with them? My heart. That’s the way it was meant to beeeeee
OMG Kreacher in a market story muttering to himself is something I now want.
FRED CRYING OUT HIS DEATH BED SPEECH
Ginny’s so sly with him to get him to drink his medicine.
She tucked him in 3
HAHAHA I can’t smell now but I know you smell delicious
Do you want to get with this? GAH FRIENDS!
“nuzzling her neck before he turned his head and sneezed three times.” - real sexy harry.
Slap that booty
Sneaky, spiking his orange juice!
Glad he finally admitted he’s sick!
Ron’s dying! LMFAO acting like a real man when sick
witchyromy chapter 17 . 6/17
After reading your second chance story i wanted more of your writing. So i thought i would start with your A Different Beginning, however i have to say i was disappointed i could not get trough even the first two chapters, there was no emotion it felt very "flat". Then i saw that it was more then 10 years ago that you wrote that. so i thought to read these missing moments which are much more resent. And yes here i could connect with your writing style again, here i felt the emotions and forgot the time i was reading. You have grown a lot in the writing ability and style in the last 10 years!
as for more missing moments?
- Harry asking Arthur for his daughters hand.
- Jamie's first day at Hogwarts and McG's reaction
- Some kind of Confrontation/Talk of Harry with the Weasley brothers concerning him dating their sister. (because that is something all of them much have much anticipated, and then she shows up with the man who defeated Voldy!)

Keep up the great work, and i look forward to read your next chapter of A Second chance!
Seriously Sam chapter 12 . 6/11
Omg omg omg. That was amazing! I loved every single freaking word of it! Eeeeeeeh!
Velvethopefics chapter 17 . 4/25
Aw! All of these were perfect! sorry it took me so long to finish them. I really love the sense of completeness in them - they were one shots but they all felt as though they were part of a bigger whole. That takes work and talent, B. Thank you for sharing them all with us!
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