Noooo, I was enjoying reading this. I hope you do get around to updating it again, would love to see the end result!

Oh dang! I can't believe I didn't read this earlier! I also have no idea how this was originally meant to be a two-shot HAHAHA.

Gotta say that it's been a while since I've read an FT fanfic with this kind of setting but you've done an amazing job at it. I really love how this has all panned out and how Natsu and Lucy's first meeting occurred. They be getting on like besties now ohoho!

I'm kind of anxious about what will happen now that they are in Fiore though. Also...Sabertooth DUN DUN DUNNN! Insert wishful thinking - Hopefully it's smooth sailing for the most part? Somehow, I highly doubt this will be the case haha.

In any case, I really look forward to what you have in store for us and how Natsu and Lucy's relationship develops wink wink! Until then! :)

Sen

Oh Lucy that’s where you give the idea and Mira pops up and says she will plan your wedding. But honestly this is a really good story so far and I hope you update soon

Hope you are feeling better! Great chapter as always!

Her hair T_T.
Natsu is so oblivious to his own feelings. I wonder when he'll realize that he won't actually see her anymore if the plan goes down as is?

WooWho time to infiltrate Fiore! Love how you are developing all the characters. Excited for the next chapter!

oh my goodness! I'm so excited for the next chapter!

So excited to see another chapter!
However, I do have a question about the last chapter. Loki is strong enough to stay in the same realm as Lucy without using her power at all. He didn't do that this time and he has always been super over protective of Lucy. Is her bond with the spirits not as strong as in the show? Because I imagine Loki would stick around to try to help Lucy in some way if he saw her just crumble like that.

Loving the story and the development of Natsu and Lucy's relationship. Can't wait to see more of Gray and Erza as well.

I just gotta say though, i really, really and i seriously emphasize on really, like how you portray Lucy in this one, Natsu as well. Jude's behavior is indeed suspicious if Lucy herself was feeling odd by it and Sabertooth is probably coming soon, so i'm practically itching with excitement. Ugh, i can't wait to read it tomorrow.

Hmmm... I wonder if someone (a mage) is controlling Jude... hmmm

Woah things are getting intense. Possesive Natsu though!

Oooo thank you for the update!

Didn't expect that reaction from Jude! Natsu is getting possessive quickly, and I like that.

love it! another great chapter!

I'm excited to see Lucy's interactions with Natsu now that he knows. I also can't wait to see what Jude does when he finds out what the prince did and Lucy being a mage.