Reviews for Lifeline
redacted987 chapter 1 . 5/19/2019
You made me smile. It made my day. Thank you.
Heat Salamance chapter 1 . 9/16/2018
This is so great.

I love all these little shots of Sonic interacting with his Segasonic buddies, even if it's just by phone. And how they react to Tails (I didn't mean adopt a child) and Knuckles (that is his name, lol).

Now, all you need to do is make a post-Mania Plus (or Mania Adventures) sequel.

This little short was great.

Thanks for writing this!
Taranea chapter 1 . 4/6/2018
Oh hey, really cute fic you got there! :) I liked how you managed to encapsulate a Lot of the characters with very short scenes, and it was very easy to follow the games' plotlines, very nicely summarized. Mighty's incredulousness at Knuckles' Name was hilarious and I thought the Chaotix tie in into the Sonic Games plotline was very elegantly done. Thanks for sharing and making me Smile with that cute ending! :D
Awdures chapter 1 . 3/20/2018
Oh this is lovely. The way it all fits around the edges, never actually contradicting anything we see by the presence of these two but adding to it, like it was there all along and just a split second off screen from what we saw.

The dialogue is spot on, so very Sonic and it's full of fun details like Knuckles perturbed by the camera and indignant about people's assumptions of what he does or doesn't know!

I thught the timeline 'flub' with having CD and Chatoxi happening simultaneously (inasmuch as that makes sense with timetravel involved!) worked well. And it was a fun integration to have the Phantom Ruby be a symptom not just a cause of the timetravel/dimensional wierdness!
Infinite's Ruby chapter 1 . 3/18/2018
This was godtier seriously though this was well written and the dialouge was solid. The character interactions between everyone was adorable.

I am hyped for Sonic Mania plus.

You, sir, did a very good job with this fic.
this kills the man chapter 1 . 3/18/2018
Ashe this is godtier dialogue. It's so upbeat and energetic, and I smiled the entire time I read. Some highlights:

"...You’re friendly—”

“And handsome,” Sonic shoots back.

“And conceited,” Mighty finishes. “Just go talk to someone.”

Sonic groans. “Okay Mom...”

Also, this snippet made me snort:
Sonic feels like he’s been sent through the time travel equivalent of a blender, or a meat grinder, or a meat grinder blender (for all your meat processing needs!),...

Oh, and Knuckles's "I know things!" made me crack up too. Poor knuckles, lol.

This is just an excellent comedy overall, with some good heartfelt moments, too (specifically the moments where Sonic or Mighty/Ray feel bad for not being able to help out the other. That's the problem with being busy; you might be in a position where you need help yourself, much less be able to consider helping another. Distance sure doesn't help, but at least with the communicator, they feel it less.)

I'm so so impressed. Ty for writing this aaaaa
Queenie2008 chapter 1 . 3/18/2018
That was cool! Very enjoyable to read. :D The humor was spot-on, and so was the characterization! I loved the friendship between Mighty and Sonic, haha. Ray was pretty rad, too.

This makes me more hyped for Sonic Mania Plus. Props to ya! :3
Unknownlight chapter 1 . 3/17/2018
This is just perfect. Seriously, thank you for writing this.
The Bad Singer chapter 1 . 3/17/2018
While I had fun yesterday cringing at terrible Sonic Fanfiction, it’s a joy that I finally found a great one like this! It’s really charming and fun to read! Putting Sonic Generations before Mania in the timeline is brilliant! I was reading this with a goofy smile on my face while Sonic is making friends!
SharpDragonKlaw chapter 1 . 3/17/2018
I'm HYPED for Mighty and Ray!